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Sandy Rocky Beachside


Sandy Rocky Beachside
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Copyright: Lori Cannon (LCannon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 398 W: 151 N: 798] (3046)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06
Categories: Seascape
Camera: Kodak Easyshare LS753
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-06-21 9:41
Viewed: 1425
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot of the eastern side of the beach in Punta de Mita, Mexico. I loved the variety on the beach, smooth rocky spots, great deposits of larger stones, many seashells, and here some sand. It was a very interesting beach to explore, so different than the beach I'm used to, and HOT, it was over 90 degrees F on this afternoon walk. Still I miss it already!

Photo: Cropped, Levels, Resized, Sharpened.
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To Fisher: I think I understand,LCannon 1 06-21 18:01
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A difficult composition Lori.
Although you did well capturing this scene, it doesn't work as a composition.
Possibly walking to the left more and pointing towards the right to capture the bluff etc. would be pleasing.
IE, see that point of land in the horizon, it would end up closer to the edge on the left, between the point of the bluff on horizon and this one close in, you would see what's there. Hopefully this explains the point of view I'm seeking and how far out to the left you would walk.
The sand or pebbles in the foreground, that's another composition to seek, maybe turning around and shoot what's is in that direction with the pebbles.

Mike

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3446 W: 144 N: 5883] (17434)
  • [2005-06-22 4:06]

There is definitely a great variety of different items here at the beach Lori. I like your POV and the colours and details are nice and sharp. Well done.

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