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Ugly
Photo Information
Copyright: Enrique Sallent (andante) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 5] (91)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-04-10
Categories: Birds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-20 6:56
Viewed: 1205
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A marabout, image taken at the Washington, DC zoo.
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Hi Enrique,
it's a nice picture- The DOF is very good, makes the bird stand out well from the soft BG.
Well composed, good details and nice colours.
Well done.

a belated, Welcome to TN.

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  • odin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 197 W: 1 N: 214] (1143)
  • [2006-01-20 10:37]
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Enrique, this is realy ugly. But the picture is great, details, colors and sharpness.
So the problem is this birds is not a caribou. Caribou look like this http://www.exzooberance.com/virtual%20zoo/they%20walk/caribou/caribou.htm
On your picture is a bird and this is a marabout. I know it was probaly only a mistake and i have not problem with that.
Well Done
SÉbastien

Bonjour!

Bonne prise,l'éclairage est parfait et fait bien ressortir les détails de l'oiseau.Félicitations pour la netteté de l'image.

Merci Enrique et bienvenue sur TN!

joseph

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  • loot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5676 W: 602 N: 3193] (8545)
  • [2006-01-30 22:31]
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Hi Enrique
Welcome to TN. You did very well with this Marabou stork (Leptoptilos crumeniferus). It is a very good composition with sufficient space in front of the bird. Good DOF as the BG is soft and evenly coloured which makes the bird stand out well on the photo. Good capture of the feather details on the black wing although the whites are slightly over exposed. Very well done and TFS.

Nice composition with this big tree behind. Maybe I would have give more space over the head and the whites are OE. I tried a little WS.
Thank you Enrique.

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