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The Latest Attempt


The Latest Attempt
Photo Information
Copyright: Howard Cheek (marhowie) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5810 W: 1246 N: 10726] (35311)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-24
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Canon EF 100-400mm L IS USM, Digital ISO 400, Hoya UV-Guard (77mm)
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/2500 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Just Missed Shots., Birds of Texas, Birds in Flight [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-01 11:12
Viewed: 1024
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Mockingbird (Mimus polyglottos), inflight.

HOPEFULLY HIS HEAD (and mine) WILL CLEAR-UP SOMETIME THIS YEAR! :-}}

Hope everyone had a great New year celebration!!

POST PROCESSING included a new technique I tried for the first time. In the original photo, the birds head ran right to the edge of the frame. In Elements 3, I placed the original image on a white, bordered canvas, cloned the BG area to the front of the subject and cropped. I added a gaussian blur to cover the noise and my cloning work also.

Thanx for lookin'

dew77, Luc, Demetrio, Dave, metcher, Mousehill, red45, livios, PDP, coasties, thistle, cedryk, Signal-Womb has marked this note useful
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To klemmg: Sharp?marhowie 2 01-02 16:51
To Toucadoo: Post Process Bypassed..marhowie 1 01-01 19:05
To manyee: Steady Handmarhowie 1 01-01 13:39
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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5171 W: 297 N: 4050] (13069)
  • [2006-01-01 11:18]

Hello Howard!
Excellent action shot.Moment you caught is great.I liked POV,clear details,blurred BG and composition a lot.TFS...:-)

Happy New Year Howard and thank you for this beautyfull picture

Didou

I think any attempt to catch a bird in flight is challenging and you have done well to get this bird in action as well as its body facing you.

Good work.

Demetrio

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3103 W: 234 N: 5930] (20016)
  • [2006-01-01 12:15]
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This is a winner, Howard. Congratulations!
I love the pose and the sharpness of this shot.
I don't know about your head, but you must have had a very steady hand to outline this bird for the gaussian blur. Excellent job, my friend. : )
Happy New Year to you and yours!
ManYee

Hello Howard,
I'm always a little jelous to see flying birds with such sharpness - I can't do that, they are too fast for me! It's exellent, a wonderful bird in motion.
All the best for you, have a good start into 2006, bye
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Hi Howard.
You have a really good picture here and very good PP.
Well composed, nice colours and very good details.
Great work, my friend.

Good shot to start the year. Looks that you had to do some difficult PP work to frame it right. Anyway, good job: I wouldn't guess 'till I read your note.
Have a greaT 2006.
Regards, Petru

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  • Dave Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 527 W: 47 N: 674] (2171)
  • [2006-01-01 13:19]

This is cool Howard!
You are bringing this to a new level...;-)
I have a hard enough time trying to get them on the ground...;-(
Quite impressive!
Thanks,
Dave
ps lookin' is my pleasure!

Hi Howard!
Very good flight shot and good PS work ! Happy New Year!

Hello Howard, Happy New Year to you and yours as well. Thanks for telling about the PS work, I wouldn't have noticed! I especially like the pose you've captured here, could be a bit sharper, but much better than I could dream of!

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2816 W: 75 N: 7977] (26975)
  • [2006-01-01 16:24]

Great start of New Year Howard! Perfectly frozen in time, excellent composition and moment. Also very good PP work!

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2306 W: 324 N: 4306] (16856)
  • [2006-01-01 16:34]

Howard, another really great attempt.

Excellent action shot of this bird. The blur on the bg is very beautiful.

Keep on bringing them.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2951 W: 366 N: 3779] (11763)
  • [2006-01-01 17:30]

Hi Howard, very nice work, great frozen moment. Interesting to read about the PP work. Well done.

The PP bypassed me I didn't know of it until I read your note, I find that you did an excellent job plus nice capture of the mockingbird. :)

Great dynamic shot of this bird, excellent job on PP which results in a very good composition. BG well complements the action, as it has these blurred lines suggesting something explodes. Very good light on the head and body of the bird with a small shadow covering only part of the neck. Beautifully spread-out motion-blurred wings. Overall a bit soft, suggest a bit of sharpening.
Gabi

Hi Howard,
The post processing work has made this an excellent shot. I have started practicing my in flight shots, but have a long way to go. The body and head are well detail. Just enough blur in the wings to inply great motion.
Scott

Bonjour Howard,
very nice capture, very interresting shot to look at. Unique timing. Good work on PP.
Congrats!

przepiekne!!!!
czyste i pienkie rozłorzone skrzydła...super złapanay moment!!!:):):):):):):)

pozdrawiam
marcin
:)

Hi Howard,
What a great shot!
Excellent detail and good lighting.
TFS!

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  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1674 W: 5 N: 2130] (11898)
  • [2006-01-02 16:38]

Bonjour!

Une belle prise en vol de cet oiseau. L'éclairage font bien ressortir les couleurs et détails de l'oiseau.

Merci Howard.

Joseph.

Hi Howard

Nicely captured. I like the detail shown in the outstretched wing. Nice catchlight and excellent OOF BG. Well done. TFS.

This is a very nice shot Howard!
The pose of the bird is great. Picture has very good details and lovely colours.
You did a good job on the PP.
I like it very much.
WELL DONE!

I love the POV with the wonderful wing span. Well seen, Howard. Happy new year!

Alli

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  • cedryk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 969 W: 57 N: 1662] (5072)
  • [2006-01-03 20:05]

Great attempt, Howard :-)
I like this extra-dynamic shot very much!
Best greetings,
Michal

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 262 W: 17 N: 499] (3249)
  • [2006-01-06 12:32]

very beautiful action shot with a nice BG... I like the color of the eye... :))
well done Howard.. :))

Great in-flight capture Howard. Not an easy shot, I like the way you have captured some motion in the wings. Great job.

Hi Howard,
Excellent photo, I love this action, transmites very well a flying sensation. Nice Bg. I hope to post some local mockinbirds.
thanks for sharing.
Hernán

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