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Beautiful Yellow # 2


Beautiful Yellow # 2
Photo Information
Copyright: Jorge Chemas (jchemas) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 561 W: 30 N: 749] (3390)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-24
Categories: Insects
Camera: Canon 300D, 18-55mm/f3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-18 11:02
Viewed: 823
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another selection from my back yard.
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To goutham_ramesh: Hi Gouthamjchemas 2 02-02 07:02
To whippersnapper: Hi Philljchemas 1 01-31 19:02
To crissie78: Hi Chrisjchemas 1 01-20 19:08
To Athila: Hi Alainjchemas 1 01-19 11:29
To dew77: Hi Sebnemjchemas 1 01-19 11:21
To Jannie: Hi Jenniejchemas 1 01-19 11:15
To coasties: Hi Pamjchemas 1 01-19 11:14
To hummingbird24: Hi Anna Lujchemas 1 01-19 11:11
To ddg: Hi Didierjchemas 1 01-19 11:03
To ellis49: Hi Gertjchemas 1 01-19 11:00
To chiliu: Hi Chijchemas 1 01-18 19:57
To phlr: Hi Paulojchemas 1 01-18 17:17
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  • Great 
  • phlr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1241 W: 129 N: 881] (2814)
  • [2006-01-18 14:35]
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Very good!
Sharp and clear shot!
Perfect on details!
Very nice POV!
Good BG!
It's a Pieridae, probably a Pieris brassicae (Linnaeus, 1758) or a Pieris ergane (Geyer, 1828).
5* and TFS!

  • Great 
  • Dave Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 47 N: 674] (2173)
  • [2006-01-18 16:27]
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Hi JC,
I think this one could benefit from some cropping IMO. But, otherwise very nice!
Thanks,
Dave

Hi Jorge,
This is very good macro!
Excellent sharpness, good detail and nice colour,
Thanks for sharing!

Excellent close-up Jorge!

Focus is very sharp and exposure is perfect. I like the soft light and the shallow DOF.
If it was my image, I would crop differently since the yellow stem attact our attention to much without improving your main subject. In fact it's a distraction. I made a workshop with a different cropping. I hope it won't offense you.
However, it's an excellent image and TFS.

  • Great 
  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4774 W: 294 N: 4020] (13209)
  • [2006-01-19 3:54]
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Hello Jorge!
Wonderful close up.Details are crisp clear and razorsharp.POV,colors,lighting and
composition are excellent.TFS...:-)

Hi ,

What a wondeful shot.
perfect details great pic.
I feel the stem coming out is a distraction, but that is the way nature is can we change it no!!!

Very good composition and DOF. Detail is very good.

TFS

This is a great shot. Nice crisp, clear deatils, but the stem in the foreground is very distracting.

Hello Jorge,

I am afraid that I have to agree with the others regarding a crop to remove the distracting stem, from, what otherwise, is a perfect and beautiful image.

Great job, thank you!

  • Great 
  • ddg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 855 W: 23 N: 942] (5111)
  • [2006-01-19 9:31]
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Well caught Jorge, this is an excellent shot. I think it's a Pieridae!! Copmposition, colors and sharpness are perfect, very well done, Didier.

Hi Jorge.
a nice close-up with good POV. Maybe little to much space in the right. Very good details and nice colours.
Well done.

Very good shot Jorge!! I like it alot, it is very sharp and has great details!! TFS

Gr CRis

wow what a shot and nice colours well done

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