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Black Swan


Black Swan
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Copyright: zhewen wu (fastshot) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 35 W: 0 N: 2] (464)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon F5, 17 -35 2.8, Fuji Velvia 100F
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-09 4:53
Viewed: 841
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Black swans are numerous in many wetland habitats and marine harhours.
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  • DOBIS Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 126 W: 16 N: 170] (632)
  • [2006-06-09 5:44]

Hello Zhewen,
very nice lcear and detailed swan in the front. In my opinion, the picture can be more interesting if you will do the crop and focus more on the swan in the front.
Regards,
Martina

You have captured the elegance of black swans here, Zhewen.
Very good POV, sharpness and colours.
TFS.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2006-06-14 18:11]
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Hello Zhewen, I like the idea you had here. I think you needed to get the horizon horizontal if you include it - otherwise crop it out. Swan three really needs to be the other way around, I'm also not sure the velvia works here. It's a good shot though and I really appreciate the idea.

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