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Critiques [Translate]
- pvs
(13835) - [2006-07-02 4:50]
Hi Janice,
A funny capture of this small sparrow,yes you can find them here as well a lot around public places were some leftovers can be found,well seen and captured,
Paul
- ddg
(5111) - [2006-07-02 4:52]
Hello Janice, excellent shot with a great texture and a splendid pose of the bird. Very well done and TFS, Didier.
- csmnlm
(443) - [2006-07-02 5:58]
Hi Janice!
It is a very lovely photo.Great pov, exposure and composition.Well done!
- marhowie
(302) - [2006-07-02 9:11]
Cute closeup Janice, I like the close-crop framing, pose and POV..
You may have coined a new common name for this common bird? :) Of course, this variety has expresso with its morning toast ;))
Well done and Thank You mf.
- wkshelton
(5492) - [2006-07-02 11:14]
Hello Janice, excllent details, BG, POV, DOF Perfect colors, great Job, TFS KYle
- liquidsunshine
(11494) - [2006-07-02 13:31]
Nice capture Janice,
Good detail, colours and sharpness. exposure and lighting are good. Good POV and composition.
Thanks for posting, have a great week.
- dew77
(13209) - [2006-07-02 15:43]
Hello Janice,
Wonderful capture.I think,he wanted to say:"Please,cut my fingernails before taken the photo!":)
I liked pose of sparrow,catch light in eyes,framing,use of light BG and composition a lot.TFS...:-)
- fungiman
(1005) - [2006-07-03 4:07]
Hi Janice,
Interesting photo as Pam has mentioned there is something strange about it. I also can not pick what it is, ends of the feather look strange! Never the less nice composition and colours
Clive
- coasties
(27718) - [2006-07-03 4:50]
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- scottevers7
(12267) - [2006-07-03 8:06]
Hi Janice,
Excellent frame filling shot on this Sparrow. Nice colors and detail in this little guy. DOF is perfect with a beautiful OOF backround.
Scott
- thistle
(9272) - [2006-07-03 14:36]
Hello Janice,
Lovely shot! Technically maybe no perfect, but I like the pose of this fellow and POV a lot!
WELL DONE!
- PDP
(11769) - [2006-07-05 19:20]
Hi Janice, very cute and a frame filler. Nice all round although maybe a wee bit oversharpened? Nice work.
- pilonm
(2919) - [2006-07-06 8:17]
Hello Janice,
Nice picture of this house sparrow! Good pov and pose from him! Colors looks very natural but I think that maybe you use noise remover too much for we lose some details on the feathers... Still a good picture, (points tomorrow).
Michel
- aido
(4046) - [2006-07-07 10:36]
Hi Janice,
I like this little fellow, he has a mischevious look about him :-) A nice shot, good detail, great exposure and colours. DOF is perfect, an interesting note too, great work.
Regards,
Adrian
- chiliu
(6494) - [2006-07-19 22:25]
Hi Janice,
Excellent close-up! Great POV and good details.
Very well done and thanks for sharing!
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Hi Janice
What has happened here? Not up to your usual standard. Maybe cropped too much, or an effect from some post process work, noise removal maybe or over sharpened, or both. It has a strange look to it. This is not a criticism, but merely to help, as this is what the site is about, but sometimes people won’t be honest and I believe this is unfair on the member being critiqued as it doesn’t help them to improve. The pose and the catchlight are both delightful. Hope this helps my friend.