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Rocks, Waves, Clouds and Sky


Rocks, Waves, Clouds and Sky
Photo Information
Copyright: Rubem Porto Jr (Rubem) (28)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-06
Categories: Ocean
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-08-20 5:55
Viewed: 3936
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Portuguese]
Costa do Sauipe, Bahia, Brazil
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To nazirbadar: Thanks for the commentsRubem 1 08-21 10:27
To Evelynn: Thanks for the commentsRubem 1 08-21 10:23
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Witaj,
Good piece of landscape photo!
Good POV with perfect exposure and focus. Great clarity, vivid colour and details.
Well composed and well seen...
Thanks for sharing and best wishes from Poland.
Alina

Hello Rubem,
Nice scenery.but I felt that the upper picture looks too blank.
Colors and contrast very nice,however I have done a workshop.Please do look at it.
Thanks.
Nazir

Hi Rubem
Nice picture with soft colors and very clear details...Even under the water...Well done and TFS.
Regards
Leyla

Hello Rubem,

Welcome to TN. It is always nice to see more landscape/seascape photographers here. There used to be a lot more of us. We need to recruit more of them.

I like a lot of the elements in your photo: The cloud is especially nice; the foreground rocks and pools; the color, sharpness and exposure are very natural.

I felt the same as Nazir when I first looked at the image. I think the expanse of empty sky robs the image of some of its impact. I also did a workshop before I noticed that he had done one. I kept the photo ratio and cropped out the large half rocks on the left and some of the sky. I think the rocks anchor the eye a bit and I'd like to visually be swept out to sea and up to that wonderful cloud.

TFS
Evelynn : )

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