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001 - Butterfly 88


001 - Butterfly 88
Photo Information
Copyright: Margit Schendel (Margit) (83)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-04-22 12:09
Viewed: 1123
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I hope you enjoy my first photo in TN. This I called Butterfly 88. You may see why in its wings. I would appreciate very much your comments on what I should improve my techniques. Thank you.
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  • ellis49 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3645 W: 350 N: 8890] (28681)
  • [2005-04-22 12:31]
  • [3]

Very good macro Margit.
Nice colours, good details and composition with a nice diagonal. Maybe little less space to left and little more space to the right.Very well done.
Welcome to TN.

A pleasure to look at, Margit. Very beautiful buterfly you posted, and strange. I must admit I had never seen before.
I am looking forward to see more!
Thanks very much, and welcome to TN.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3455 W: 144 N: 5911] (17514)
  • [2005-04-22 16:38]
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Margit, I don't think you could improve any more on this shot, apart from cropping a bit off the left-hand side and giving it has more space ahead of it. But that's a minor.
Your butterfly is very sharp and his details so easy to see. I'm impressed. Well done, and welcome to TN.

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2058 W: 315 N: 4404] (14713)
  • [2005-04-22 20:39]

An excellent first performance, Margit.
Nice composition and point of view.

I wish you the most cordial welcome on TrekNature.
In the pleasure to admire your next posts and to read your notes and critics.
Thank you for sharing a so beautifull picture and for the enjoyment which it give us.

Excellent shot, focus is spot on, depth of field is spot on, exposure is spot on, and the subject is intersting. Well done.

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3074 W: 233 N: 5867] (19734)
  • [2005-04-23 3:08]

What a beautiful butterfly, Margit. You captured it in super sharp details. The exposure is perfect, showing off the colors and patterns on the wings. Interesting composition. An excellent job. Welcome to TN. : )

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  • Vini Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 27] (117)
  • [2005-04-23 10:03]

Margit, Aí vai minha contribuição... Marcos

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  • Toni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 2 N: 316] (2034)
  • [2005-04-24 16:50]

Welcome to TN. Great details of the butterfly on such a lovely soft background. I like the angle of the branch and the way the antennas run parallel to it.
Well done.
Toni

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2306 W: 324 N: 4306] (16856)
  • [2005-04-28 17:39]

Olá, Margit. Ainda que meio atrasado, quero também lhe dar boas vindas.

Excelente macro. Como já dito acima, talvez seja melhor deixar mais espaço à direita e menos à esquerda.

Excelente nitidez, ângulo e profundidade de campo.

Parabéns.

I have a 88´s shot, look my galery

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