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Butterfly
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Copyright: Paula Miranda (ppmiranda) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 45 W: 2 N: 13] (324)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-14
Categories: Insects
Camera: Olympus X 785
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-07-22 14:17
Viewed: 861
Points: 11
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Hi,
Great shot with excelent pov and natural colors.
Regards,
Iulian

Olá Paula,
Ótima composição com uma bela mariposa e flores idem.
O POV perpendicular ao foco sempre deixará as asas com um pouco de ruído; em compensação, isso proporcionou a obtenção de maiores detalhes da cabeça do inseto (olho, antenas e espirotromba).
Espero que você intensifique suas visitas ao Parque Estadual Paulo César Vinha, para nos presentear com mais registros desses belíssimos animais.
Parabéns,
Um grande abraço,
José Roberto

Interesante documento con bonitos detalles. Buen encuadre. El insecto es encantador. Un saludo Paula.

Hello Paula,
Nice shot of this lovely moth.
Lovely flower it is on and the sodft colors are wonderful.
Good exposure with nice details to.
Just would like to have seen a different crop because in my opinion there is a bit to much space behing the moth.
A bit of unsharp masking also would help to bring out details, specially in the wonderful detailed antennas more.
Did rework the image a little in photoshop.
Hope you like it.
Kindest regards,
Harry

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2267 W: 10 N: 2646] (15625)
  • [2007-07-23 0:20]

Hola Paula,
original macro,
tonos e iluminación excelentes,
buen pov,
saludos
:)

nice composition, good colours, interesting specimen
more contrast and less noise would be fine
proframe has done a good WS but still noisy
so i've done my first WS on somebody's photo on TN
tell me ;)
regards
jo

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  • Helio Silver Star Critiquer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 7] (389)
  • [2008-05-18 10:23]

Ótima foto, parabéns !

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