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Miraflores sunset
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Copyright: gil briones (gilbriones2002)
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| Genre: Landscapes |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2002-10 |
| Categories: Ocean |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2005-12-10 14:30 |
| Viewed: 1205 |
| Points: 1 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Miraflores, is a ritzy beach front suburb of Lima, photo taken from the Larcomar mall. |
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| To klemmg: hi | gilbriones2002 |
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12-10 19:37 |
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Hi Gil,
Very nice pastel colours and the softness goes well with that.
The central composition with the main subject so small and lost in all that space does not work for me. I have illustrated a RoT variant in a workshop. For some reason most people prefer compositions according to RoT (the "Rule of thirds" being a simple version of more elaborate compositional concepts - keword "golden mean"). It seems to invite the eye to roam in the picture. General idea is to give the eye some clear lines to follow around in the picture - diagonals, circles, triangles, frame-in-frame, ...
As is, very enjoyable colours in your nice capture.
Kind regards,
Gabi
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