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Photo Information
Copyright: Linda Logan (zenitlady) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 1 N: 169] (751)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-12
Categories: Birds
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ3
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-03-25 18:54
Viewed: 788
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
These guys fly in, empty the birdfeeder with abandon, then squawk for more. Good thing they are pretty! Sunny day.
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Excelent capture and well done on this composition. You did well with your compact, congrats.
I did a Workshop for you.

Mike

Hi Linda

Nice shot of the Bluejay. Just a bit dull in colour. Would suggest adding some contrast. Have uploaded a workshop. Other than that it's a nice closeup. Well done. TFS

Good capture, Linda.
Nice composition, colours and details.
It's need a little more contrast, but still a nice picture.
Pam and Mike have done nice WS.
Well done.

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5171 W: 297 N: 4050] (13069)
  • [2005-03-26 3:56]

Nice shot Linda!
Bluejay is very good looking ;) Well done and TFS

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3452 W: 144 N: 5895] (17468)
  • [2005-03-26 6:18]

Hi Linda, I love the colours of this bird. Good pose of him waiting for more food! Both workshops were good. Well done and TFS.

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  • pompey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 205 W: 4 N: 780] (2762)
  • [2005-03-26 17:13]

Excellent shot Linda, good feather details, colours and background.
Thanks for sharing.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2964 W: 366 N: 3848] (11755)
  • [2005-03-31 17:55]

HI Linda, very nice capture. I like the composition and the details are good. It would be great if you could include a note about the bluejay. Nice work.

Linda
This is a very natural color for a blue Jay . It is well captured and not too sharp.
I cannot get close enough to blue jays around here .

Very nice capture of this lovely bird. We don't have them here. Nice patterns on the wing. Very well done.

I agree with the others - good sharpness on those feathers.
And even his beady little eye gleams! An enemy of my cats, these are curious birds - fearless and fierce! My siamese kitty had a bald spot for ages after one of these jays swooped her. ha ha

Nice catch, Linda. Good detail and composition. From the two workshops that you have done, I can see that you are learning fast. You did the right thing by cloning out the top left corner in your first alteration.

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2058 W: 315 N: 4404] (14713)
  • [2005-04-24 22:48]

Personal assessment of the photo: good.
Great visual impact.
Aptness of the photo for the site: excellent.
Personal assessment of the note: good.
Thank you Linda.

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  • ian Gold Star Critiquer [C: 65 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-05-19 4:04]

Hi !
Great photo. Wonderful colours. Pretty photo.

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  • agea0 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 12 W: 0 N: 0] (88)
  • [2006-01-31 13:50]

Hi
Nice photo:)
Agnes

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