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Near the pond


Near the pond
Photo Information
Copyright: Svetlana Golovanova (jesst) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 375 W: 0 N: 172] (2411)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-10 11:31
Viewed: 660
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another photo from the past - it was taken 2 years ago.

I was in that park not long ago, but I couldn't find this place.
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Hello Svetlana,

This really is a lovely study in colour tones! You have included so much that makes a shot interesting: natural borders, water with reflections making a good lead-in, a bridge, blossom, avariety of textures and shapes, and soft light.
IMHO it would have a slightly better composition if a little was cropped from the top.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

I agree with Royaldevon that a little more cropped off the top would look better. I did a WS to see just how that would look. I really like the pine frame. TFS.

A quiet scenic, looking very calm and peaceful. Nature continues on and only a few, such as yourself, stop and really appreciate, then click the shutter an d share the moment. I await with cold winter for green to reappear.
Bob

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-11-11 7:03]

Hello Svetlana

A very interesting way you framed the shot with the trees.
The pastoral scene is lovely with rich colours and excellent focus and details.
The composition is nicely done.
TFS

Rob BTWS

Hello Lana,
You had shown to us the most natural surrounding in the original stage, very beautiful, serene and peaceful!
good pov with so much details
all the best
Tony

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3002 W: 162 N: 991] (2901)
  • [2007-11-12 4:40]

Hello Svetlana,
What a beautiful composition nicely framed by the tree trunks. It must be sprintime it looks so lush and green! Beautiful colours and nice reflections in the water.
TFS and regards, Ulla

Hello Svetlana,
A picturesque scenery and a well balanced composition!
I like the diagonal stream and the wonderful greenery...
Interesting framing by the trees, clever work!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Svetlana,
Lovely peaceful scene.
Unique ,pleasing composition with the tree trunks as framing
The diagonal POV toward the bridge was a wise move
Good color and lighting
TFS
Richard

Hi Svetlana!

I first was a bit surprised by the natural framing with the trunks. But I like it in a way. It opens the door to the center of interest which is the bridge. The colors are wonderful, maybe the whole picture could need some level corrections to make it a bit more vivid.

Kind regards

Markus

Hello Svetlana,
Idyllic setting, I like the natural framing of the tree trunks here..
Nice detail, color, exposure, and composition :)
Well done.
Howard

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  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2405 W: 63 N: 4227] (13822)
  • [2007-12-02 23:25]

Hi Svetlana,
Good composition, colors, details, POV and a nice natural framing. TFS
Best wishes,
Selen

Hallo Svetlana
This scenery surely has such a heavenly appearance. It looks so peaceful and the place where one can relax and just forget about everything. The green of the landscape is so bright and beautiful; the water looks so refreshing and cool. I like the reflection of the trees in the water. I think it could be an idyllic place to be. Thanks for sharing. It was lovely to look at.
Kind regards
Anna

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