House Sparrow - Male and Female

Critiques [Translate]

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• CeltickRanger (6988)
• [2007-12-19 18:03]

hello Angelina

first i have to tell that i will be the first one
on the list to critique, before Bob (eqshannon)
héhéhéhéhé salutations to our friend Bob

now coming to your photo, you are writting
it is not the best photo you've ever taken
but you kno what, i like this kind of photos
where there is branches leafs beetween
the bird and the camera's lens

and your focus is excellent on the one of the middle (the male)

TFS

Asbed

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• pankajbajpai (14202)
• [2007-12-19 19:16]

hello angelina,
nice capture, the couple looks good together, tyhe male is looking directly in to the lens, nice pov,
tfs & regards
pankaj

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• Jamesp (14380)
• [2007-12-19 23:28]

Hi Angelina

Congratulations on your new lense - I know the feeling well! I like this type of shot anyway - and to be honest - most of my shots are like this, but at least with this sort of shot you know you were there!!

James

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• elefantino (13731)
• [2007-12-20 0:46]

Too confused in the BG...

Bye,
Andrea

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• haraprasan (13068)
• [2007-12-20 1:38]

Hi Angelina,
A beautiful capture of this couple. Very natural composition and good details. In our city it is some what nearly extinct species. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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• joey (19801)
• [2007-12-20 2:15]

Good morning Angy!
well congratulations on your new lens!!
I will be looking forward to some super zoomed in photos :)
This is a pretty good shot seeing as you were probably shaking with excitement!!
Great POV and composition.
Well done :D
Thanks,
Joe

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• eqshannon (19775)
• [2007-12-20 3:15]
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He he.....You did in fact do it Asbed...I sometimes think everyone knows what everyone else does...scary but in a funny way. Angle! A great picture with a nice new lens...and honestly...we have talked about this lens before you bought it,but had I seen the kind of quality it gives you and you have had it only under an hour when you took the picture..and did it hand held...I am quite envious....and I am also very glad you bought it...and I am glad Asbed noticed it all too!:-)

I have to laugh. I gave Asbed my last 2 points today... so in a a way he beat me twice...but let me guess....I will be back later on after midnight sometime:-) Thanks for getting so excited!!! All of this makes my day and to anyone who has not downloaded Luc's Xmas present for us....PLEASE do it...he is a talented guy who surprised me very much!

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• XOTAELE (8)
• [2007-12-20 9:06]

Una interesante imagen con muy buenos detalles. Los pajarillos sorprendidos por una paparazzi...je
Buena nota.
Saludos, JL.

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• Mana (16346)
• [2007-12-20 9:09]

Hi Angelina,
Just marking this wonderful post for the moment, lest I miss it, and will come back with a proper critique later.
Regards.
Sumon

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• Alex99 (14629)
• [2007-12-20 11:16]

Hi Angelina.
I congratulate you on purchasing of new telelens and wish many tele shots. So natural and nice scene. May be shot is really soft a bit but it is a point. Cute scene, nice colours and details. My greetings and best regards.
Alexei.

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• nglen (20950)
• [2007-12-20 12:00]

Hi. Just got home so a quick note for now to say great shot. well done TFS.
Nick..

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• jaycee (14955)
• [2007-12-20 12:30]

Hi Angy,

Congratulations on your new lens. I'm sure you will master it soon. It's a nice picture of this couple but I think I would have cropped it and just left the male. He is soooooo good.

Jane

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• gracious (12270)
• [2007-12-20 18:47]

Hello Angy,
very pleased with your new lens first shot!
good clarity with details on the bird!
well composed and good notes
cheers
Tony

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• nick27 (516)
• [2007-12-21 4:23]

hi Angelina,
Sorry I( have not critiqued in ages, I have been very busy. A great photo for me to see when i return ;-). The POV is nice and you make the subject very interesting and beautiful,
Well Done and Merry Christmas,
Nick :-)

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• lousat (9959)
• [2007-12-21 12:27]

The pic is not perfect but the moment is very nice,i think you made the maximum inside this trees,thanks for share,LUCIANO

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• Luis52 (10144)
• [2007-12-21 19:51]

Hi Angelina. Nice photo of this two House Sparrows. I had never seen both in a photo. As far as I can see Your new lens works very well.
Feliz Navidad Y prospero Año Nuevo Angy.
Luis52.

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• uleko (23526)
• [2007-12-22 7:35]

Hello Angelina,
I can understand your excitement and this is not too bad at all. This is how we normally see them after all and focus is sharp on the
male. Lovely colours too. Best of luck with your new toy!
TFS and regards, Ulla

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• pablominto (15470)
• [2007-12-22 10:24]

Hello Angelina,
A lovely couple, posing so nicely for the photographer!!
Seasonal greetings from Norway,
Pablo -

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• EOSF1 (21322)
• [2007-12-27 5:01]

Hello Angelina, great moment ! Very good picture of this couple, well composed and fine details, well done ! Happy new Year !

Mario

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• bobair (4268)
• [2008-01-14 19:24]
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Hi Angelina,
I know how it is to be excited about trying out a new lens for the first time as I was the same way when I got my 100-400mm lens.I think you have dne reasonably well in this capture even without a tripod and the thing is not the focus so much but the noise in the image.I have tried a workshop for this one with my take on your little sparrows.To date I have yet to take any wildlife photos using a tripod and the reason is because I don't like to be encumbered when the action is dynamic. Thanks for sharing and a now belated happy new year to you and all the best. Bob