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Copyright: Laila LK (Friday) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 30 W: 0 N: 5] (681)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-04
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon 350D, Soligor 70-210 f/4,5-5,6
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-05 4:52
Viewed: 1057
Points: 8
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To Evelynn: workshopFriday 1 01-05 15:48
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A very interesting shot. I would be tempted to try a tall skinny crop of all the intertwining necks.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 148 N: 6113] (18648)
  • [2006-01-05 15:23]

Hi Laila, you show us a very interesting shot of the swans' necks. I like your composition, it could be a bit sharper, but the action is great! TFS,
Janice

Hi
Very nice shot with beautiful colour!
Well done!
Ana:)

How did you manage to arrange all those necks so photogenique?? Wonderful picture!

Hi Laila
This is a VERY interesting intertwining of necks and shapes, forming a strong triangle that arrests and holds the eye.
Lighting conditions were against you. Try at least ISo 400, f8, and expose at -0.7 EV.
The best is to shoot the swans on the water, in the same light, look at the picture, and establish whether you need to up or down the EV to suit the light and the subject. Light change constantly, so you must adjust for this.

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