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Sparrows


Sparrows
Photo Information
Copyright: Christophe Berche (christophe) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 366 W: 57 N: 372] (1781)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-11-11
Categories: Birds
Camera: Olympus C-8080 WZ
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/160 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-11-13 10:27
Viewed: 1192
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
A person gave to eat with the sparrows
as time was cloudy I regulated my camera in priority speed + flash to solidify the sparrows.
A poeple
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To Arjuna: sparrowschristophe 1 11-13 13:42
To Midi: moineauxchristophe 1 11-13 10:46
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  • Great 
  • Midi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 150 W: 24 N: 183] (2417)
  • [2004-11-13 10:37]
  • [2] [+]

Alors là ils ont eu la frayeur de leur vie avec le flash! Bravo pour cet instantané d'oiseaux qui font partie de notre vie et paysages. On voit très bien qu'ils en ont sur le bec. (du pain je pense)
Jean louis.

  • Great 
  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1023 W: 61 N: 648] (2083)
  • [2004-11-13 11:16]
  • [2]

Great action shot. Very nice focus and compo. Well seen and well done

  • Great 
  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1872 W: 304 N: 4301] (14733)
  • [2004-11-13 12:49]
  • [+]

Personnellement, je préfère vos 4 premières photos à celle-ci.
Si vous jetez un coup d'oeil sur mes photos, vous ne décèlerez presque aucune prèsence humaine.
Ce site est consacré à la Nature "sauvage".
J'ai pris quelques photos en plein Montréal mais je m'arrange pour y éliminer tout ce qui peut être de caractère "humain" (personnes, vehicules, ciment, asphalte, mobiler urbain, etc.)

Ceci dit, ce n'est pas évident de capter des oiseaux en plein vol. Bravo!

  • Great 
  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2004-11-13 15:59]
  • [2]

Very lively shot. Excellent capture Christophe, the detail is excellent and the feeze frame action is very appealing.

Christophe, It's a busy shot, that's for certain! Good focus & good use of flash to help freeze the action. I can't help but think how great it would've been to have seen the sparrows comin' instead of goin'! ;-) Thanx for posting.

  • Great 
  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-11-13 17:08]
  • [2]

Gran captura en vuelo de estas aves tan difundidas en todo el mundo.
Excelente agudeza, sobre todo en la que está en pleno vuelo.
Aceptable DOF aunque coincido con Arjuna sobre que siempre es deseable que no aparezcan escenas así de fondo.

Great capture in flight of these birds so spread anywhere in the world.
Excellent sharpness, mainly in which it is in the heat of flight.
Acceptable DOF although I agree with Arjuna on which always he is desirable that does not appear scenes that bottom.

  • Great 
  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-11-13 23:05]
  • [2]

I love the action moment. Very well done. The composition is good too.

Thanks for posting

  • Great 
  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 148 N: 6113] (18648)
  • [2004-11-14 4:03]
  • [2]

This is great - you captured these sparrows so well - very hard to do. Merci

Great capture Christophe good action shot.

I will copie Howard's critique. But it's still an exceptional post with all the sparrows in some flight action. Greta use of the flash. Well done. Tack sharp!

Strange but beautiful action shot. It is very chaotic but at the same time amusing. I love the head of tha forth one coming out of the bottom. By the way, welcome to TN, I also liked your photo of the fliying moth very much.

I love this photo! OK, it's not technically perfect, they aren't all in focus and there is some flash burnout but that doesn't matter, it's a very charming subject, your timing was perfect and the flash has frozen the action nicely.
Wery well done.

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