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Rainy day


Rainy day
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Copyright: Birgit Jokela (bikernjeeks) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 54 W: 5 N: 17] (138)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-23
Categories: Insects
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-12-03 15:13
Viewed: 2089
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
On a rainy day in a butterfly-farm in Aruba. Most of the butterflies were sleeping because of the weather but I guess this one liked water.
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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-12-03 15:32]
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Una bonita composicion Birgit a partir de la imagen de esta llamativa mariposa.
Buena agudeza con adecuados detalles en su cuerpo y alas.
Atinado DOF, sólo te recomendaría descentrar levemente la imagen del animal.
Buen trabajo.

A pretty composition Birgit from the image of this showy butterfly.
Good sharpness with adequate details in its body and wings.
Accurate DOF, to only I would recommend you to slightly put off center the image of the animal.
Good job.

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  • japie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1814 W: 100 N: 1904] (5187)
  • [2004-12-04 0:46]

Very good shot. The detail on the butterfly is excellent. I would have cropped differently, cutting off more of the top, righ and bottom. Very well done and thanks for posting.

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2156 W: 322 N: 4258] (16906)
  • [2004-12-09 20:33]

Birgit, the lady above seems to enjoy taking pictures. Great depth of field and sharpness.

Congratulations.

Lívio

This is one beautiful shot, one beautiful butterfly. I feel that the sharpness and colors are outstanding.

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1873 W: 304 N: 4300] (14729)
  • [2004-12-10 16:55]

Beautiful butterfly, Birgit.
I would have compose it otherwise, but it is you the artist.
Thanks for sharing with us.

Hi Birgit, This is a beautiful photo. I like the composition, and the clarity and detail in the butterfly is superb. Well done on such a wonderful photo :)

Hi Birgit

This is a lovely shot. The detail of the butterfly is outstanding. Excellent DoF. Well done. TFS

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  • Callie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1132 W: 105 N: 2609] (7531)
  • [2005-01-12 15:11]

Hi Birgit
I hope you have lees water and thaat your grand parents are OK too. We hear very little to nothing about what happens in your part of the world.
This is a beautyful b'fly, nice details an dof. Just crop off most of the top and bottom od the picture, leaving you with a squarish frame with only the butterfly, then you also will get rid of the overexposed greens and whites, and the image will be much stronger.

Yes Birgit a beautiful specimen indeed. Good composition and detail. I'm not sure if this is the owl butterfly as it looks slightly different from my posts on the owl. Well done.

Linda foto. Excelente macro. Cores. Contraste!
Obrigado!
Reynaldo

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  • Pedda Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 40 W: 1 N: 246] (1273)
  • [2005-02-07 7:26]

Nice picture. Grat details on the butterfly but to bad that the raindrops are more visible.

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  • hibou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 216 W: 1 N: 329] (1617)
  • [2006-02-27 19:26]

Hello Birgit !

Well done on this shot. the drops and the butterfly are sharp and the background make a good effect. TFS

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