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Caryocar brasiliensis
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Jose Luiz Jivago Rolo (Jivago) (7) |
| Genre: Plants |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2006-09-24 |
| Categories: Flowers |
| Exposure: f/2.8, 1/40 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2006-09-27 16:30 |
| Viewed: 1038 |
| Points: 3 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| Flor de Pequi da minha fazenda, sem manuseio nenhum, note a beleza dela. |
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- shal
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(2124) - [2006-09-27 16:56]
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Hi Jose,
Welcome to TN,
on this shot you should have tried a diff. POV to get a better frame,
pointing the camera down may not always work for all sorts of subjects,
here we see your subject well, but the B/G (back-ground) the mud is not separated, looks flat and takes too much away from the actual subject... the tiny flower.
Try framing techniques before posting your other shot :)
Hope you don't mind my humble advise :)
Cheers,
Vishal Sabharwal
MAGNIFIQUE FLEUR JOSE
belle composition et exposition,bon travail
bonne soirée
edith
