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United States
Title: King KongCanon Powershot S1-IS
King Kong (22)
manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3091 W: 234 N: 5896] (19880)

portrait format + USM
portrait format + USM
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-18 05:16:30] [1]
Hi Manyee, very good capture, but I think it can be improved a little by cropping and sharpening.
Original compo emphasizes POV from above, typical for a zoo perspective. A tighter crop lessens this and focuses the viewer's attention on the face and particularly the eye in the center. Compo also uses diagonals with tilt of the face running from top left to bottom right, and the snout and back of head forming additional focus points in RoT positions.
Also sharpened with USM (unsharpmask, PS CS), and resized to 72 ppi (original had 300 ppi which is needed for good quality prints; 72 is sufficient for monitor viewing as a monitor cannot show more anyway, and after resize one can do with less compression).
Regards,
Gabi
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Peru
Title: Miraflores sunset
Miraflores sunset (1)
gilbriones2002 Silver Note Writer [C: 1 W: 0 N: 12] (158)

Composition central vs. RoTs
Composition central vs. RoTs
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-10 18:01:42] [1]
A composition variant: original is arranged central, this one is according to RoT (Rule of thirds) with the sun on the left vertical third (in the middle of that vertical line) and the pink colour band at the top arranged on the upper horizontal third. Resolution naturally is less due to cropping.
Regards,
Gabi
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United States
Title: California Ground SquirrelCanon Powershot S1-IS
California Ground Squirrel (32)
manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3091 W: 234 N: 5896] (19880)

Central vs. RoT
Central vs. RoT
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-09 18:09:30] [2]
Hello everybody,

Cropped to concentrate on the portrait of this wonderfully captured squirrel centrally in the frame.

This provides a natural green frame courtesy of our green leafy friends hanging in there.

Previous placement was more off-center, though not quite according to RoT (Rules of thirds - placing the subject on a third e.g. upper third, lower third are classic positions for the horizon, also the points where the lines of horizontal and vertical thirds cross each other), which usually will make a photo visually more interesting as the eye is invited to roam.

Sometimes breaking the rules is able to provide a more interesting effect. As the green camouflage does not lend itself to much roaming anyway, I find it is better to use it as a natural frame.
Further, I am still sort of using RoT as the eye of the squirrel is on the upper horizontal RoT line and the paws are on the lower one.

Just a compositional variant of this great capture and an excuse to discuss RoT and the benefits of breaking the rules now and then ;-).

Regards,
Gabi
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United States
Title: White X-mas PelicanCanon EOS 20D
White X-mas Pelican (36) *
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719)

A Christmas Card for you
A Christmas Card for you
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-09 16:41:06]
See note of my original post!
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South Africa
Title: Cape Gannets
Cape Gannets (14)
fragman Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1628 W: 8 N: 1325] (11930)

+ contrast +USM
+ contrast +USM
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-04 16:41:10] [2]
Thought more contrast might improve this excellent capture a little.
More contrast (+15% in PS CS),
Slightly sharpened.
Nothing else changed.
Regards,
Gabi
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United States
Title: Buttercup stalkerCanon EOS 20D
Buttercup stalker (46) *
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719)

Habitat - Emeralda Marsh in bloom
Habitat - Emeralda Marsh in bloom
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-04 05:34:16]
Here is a pic of the habitat where I found this Great Blue Heron, it is called Emeralda Marsh Conservation Area.
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United States
Title: Red-bellied EncoreNikon Coolpix S2
Red-bellied Encore (14)
Dave Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 526 W: 47 N: 673] (2169)

oilpainting look with NI
oilpainting look with NI
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-03 17:09:32] [1]
Hi everybody,
This already looks like a painting and comes with an EXCELLENT composition and wonderful light effects, and I wanted to add to that making it look like an oil painting.
For that I needed more vibrant colours and sharpness and a brush-stroke-like look. NeatImage will do that nicely, as it reduces the noise/grain present and some detail is lost. As the original was not very sharp, this has the effect that it looks a bit like brush strokes.
Also sharpened with Ni and adjusted levels in PS CS.
Regards,
Gabi
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United States
Title: Crowned HornbillNikon D100
Crowned Hornbill (38)
AnimalExplorer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1032 W: 10 N: 2270] (8610)

Levels + USM
Levels + USM
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-03 16:49:07]
Hi everybody,
I tried out how it would look with more brilliant colours to bring out the dark glossy feathers and bright red beak more.
Then again, I have no idea how this bird looks naturally, so I am guessing here and it might have ended up compeletely unnatural.
I tend to keep on the conservative side of changes for that reason thopug I sometimes get carried away ...
In PS CS, I adjusted the black point with levels (picked up the black pipette and clicked on the darkest spot in the shadows I found that I thought should come out really black). Then I sharpened with USM using 100% and 0,5 radius.
Hope you find it interesting.
Regards,
Gabi
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Ukraine
Title: it is hypnosis!Konica Minolta Dimage Z10
it is hypnosis! (9)
eleana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 203 W: 82 N: 70] (2129)

noise reduced - detail lost
noise reduced - detail lost
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-02 17:21:55] [1]
Hi everybody,
I tried out what NeatImage (demoversion is available on the web) could do with this to reduce the noise while maintainig sufficient detail.
I was lucky as NI actually found an area homogenous enough to analyse for noise.
With fine texture such as fur like here that is always a compromise, and sometimes an image looks better with the noise than without but then with reduced detail.
In any case, on standard automated mode, much too much detail is lost.
I was careful with reduction particularly in the "low" area, and reduced the definition of noise until the result seemed acceptable.
The result has less noise especially in the eye, where I disliked it most, but not enough detail in the fur.
Just an experiment, thought this might be interesting.
Regards,
Gabi
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Canada
Title: AngelCanon EOS 20D
Angel (20)
EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1399 W: 120 N: 5170] (22825)

composition etc.
composition etc.
klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719) [2005-12-02 12:27:39] [2]
Your image intrigued me, it has a very high impact, so I started to play around with it, hope you don't mind.
Tried to focus on that angel/dancer motive, so I
- chose a closer composition and stressed the diagonal (portrait format as I had did not work for that after all)
-changed to b+w
-adjusted levels (black point/white poinnt redefined)
- sharpened with USM. Apart from pbvious reasons, this brought out the grain more and this create a nice effect versus the motion in the feathers.
I used PS CS for all of this.
Hope you like this variation of your wonderful shot.
Regards,
Gabi
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