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South Africa
Grace (14)
nakkie
![Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 2 N: 21]](http://i1.treknature.com/misc/n-n-s.gif) (104) |
Flip & Crop | mrvdm1
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 97 W: 14 N: 93]](http://i1.treknature.com/misc/g-s-g.gif) (301) [2005-12-07 00:52:16] [3] | I changed your composition. Remember that compo is personal, you will not allways like what I do. The tree and leaves that was on the right was a bit disturbing, so I cropped it out, and then flipped it, trying to get flow from left to right, with the portrait in the middle.
I hope you like!
PS! The detail is really great!
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Canada
Rambur's Forktail (40)
Luc
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2058 W: 315 N: 4404]](http://i1.treknature.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (14713) |
Mirror | | mrvdm1
(301) [2005-08-10 05:16:54] [3] [+] | | Luc, nothing wrong with your composition, but Hendrik mentioned the brown twig, and I thought a mirror would shift the focus a bit. Let me know what you think. |
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Estonia
Spider (4)
leif (79) |
Zoom | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-05 08:14:50] | | I used PS to mirror and crop, hoping for a diagonal with the web and getting more detail on the spider. Brightness +10, Contrast -15. Hope you like it. |
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Israel
unbalanced dragonfly (4)
uncle_litchi
(272) |
Composition | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-05 00:56:50] [3] | | I used Adobe Photoshop. Mirrored the image, rotate 20 deg CCW. Cropped and dropped the brightness -10. The composition is not that of an unbalanced fly anymore (maybe a little), but more detail is visible, and lines are visible in presentation. Hope you like it. |
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Malaysia
Healing Beauty (12)
rabani
(95) |
Composition | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-03 06:05:40] [+] | | Rabani, I cropped the shot without the whole BG, putting more emphasis on the flower. Sharpened the colors. Hope you like it. |
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United States
Jewel (26)
Lesley
(2988) |
Turning | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-03 03:17:29] | | I'm going for a more diagonal composition. I bit more bright, and the detail on the wings is visible as well. Hope you like it. |
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United Kingdom
Unknown one (18)
Signal-Womb
(10933) |
Trying | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-02 04:46:15] [4] | | I still don't know what this is, bit I played with it some. Mirrored and cropped, added some brightness and a bit of color. Hope you like it! |
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France
Lion (8)
nico83 (47) |
Clarity | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-01 07:13:56] | | Zoomed a bit (crop), and took some of the brightness away. The contrast was upped a bit, giving the lion more color. Hope you like! |
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South Africa
Who goes there!!?? (18)
mrvdm1
(301) |
Learning | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-11-01 00:10:26] | | I read a few suggestions, and decided to do a workshop on this one. More space in front and above (this si all I have above), and a bit brighter. Now he has something to look at! |
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South Africa
Meerkat (13)
corrina (71) |
Guidelines | | mrvdm1
(301) [2004-10-31 07:18:10] [1] | | I cropped it a bit, leaving space on the left as suggested, changed the contrast, brightness and a bit of hue. Used Adobe Photoshop. |
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