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New Zealand
Title: Go AWAY!Sony DSC-F828
Go AWAY! (38)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Burn Tool, Levels / Curves, Crop
Burn Tool, Levels / Curves, Crop
elizabeth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 70 W: 41 N: 1] (10) [2007-10-09 01:06:26] [2]
Hi Sue

As mentioned in my critique I have toned down the highlight areas in the background, using the burn tool, and adjusted the levels and curves to add more contrast to the image.

To remove the dark patch in the top left area of the frame, and the dark stones in the bottom left, I cropped the image. I feel this adds emphasis to the Earwig and the vertical format is more dynamic than the horizontal.

I used Adobe Photoshop CS3 to do all the above.

Hope you find this helpful.

Cheers
Elizabeth
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New Zealand
Title: SwimmingSony DSC-F828
Swimming (14)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Crop
Crop
Kathleen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 103 N: 68] (232) [2007-06-19 08:54:26] [1]
Hi Sue.
Further to my comment, I have done a crop to place the ducking in the top of the frame, now making less distracting light above him. I have also done a slight sharpen in unsharp mask of amount 150, radius 0.03 and threshold 0. In the saturation, yellow channel I have done +12 to bring out a bit of colour in him.
Hope you like

Kathleen
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New Zealand
Title: AloneSony DSC-F828
Alone (6)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Image tweaks - contrast, brighteness
Image tweaks - contrast, brighteness
pauljk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 204 W: 64 N: 65] (226) [2006-09-27 01:11:20] [4]
Hi Sue,
I have workshoped this image. Hope you don't mind.
1. Set white and black points using a levels layer. This pushed more pixels into the mid and highlight area of the histogram, which brightened the image.
2. Used a curves layer to pull a little more shadow detail out and removed yellow cast in image.
3. As the camera has locked focus just in front of the duckling, I've tried to sharpen the duck a little using USM in CS2. To improve things a bit more and gain differntiation from the BG I have added a vignette via a curves layer set to multiply mode with a inversed feathered selection around the bird.
4. Added a little more overall contrast into the image via a USM filter run set to 10,50,5.
5. Finally increased saturation in the bird via a hue sat layer with a mask. Then inverted the mask and applied another hue/sat layer a reduced saturation for the surounding foliage.
CHeers
Paul
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New Zealand
Title: Fungi TownSony DSC-F828
Fungi Town (20)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Cropped, auto-enhanced
Cropped, auto-enhanced
Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 148 N: 6113] (18648) [2005-10-03 04:54:02] [2] [+]
Hi Sue,
I have cropped your photo to make the fungi stand out more. I also auto-enhanced it with Paint Shop Pro 9 and put a tiny black border around it. The border gives the photo a better edge. PSP9 may have brightened it too much, but it gives you an idea of what it can do. I hope you like it.
Cheers
Janice
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New Zealand
Title: Lunch timeSony Cybershot DSC-F828
Lunch time (20)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

:)
:)
Krzysztof (18) [2005-07-14 19:09:57] [1]
poprawki kosmetyczne :-)
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New Zealand
Title: Lunch timeSony Cybershot DSC-F828
Lunch time (20)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

cropping
cropping
cafecrem Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1204 W: 60 N: 1392] (9248) [2005-07-14 08:59:07] [5]
I cropped a little your photo to make a mirror effect.
+ contrast
+ sharpen filter
+ red
+ green
- light
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New Zealand
Title: Fungi CitySony Cybershot DSC-F828
Fungi City (32)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Cropping and sharpening
Cropping and sharpening
JeanMichel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 633 W: 87 N: 938] (2864) [2005-07-14 06:18:32] [1]
Just an idea... cropped out the bottom (sorry for the signature :-) and a bit on the left and the top. The bottom of fungi line starts with a wide section, getting progressively thinner on the top, adding the feeling of gradation on the oblique. Sharpened a bit.
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New Zealand
Title: DragonflySony Cybershot DSC-F828
Dragonfly (18)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Straightened
Straightened
Runnerduck Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 386 W: 61 N: 615] (1849) [2005-06-21 06:09:31] [2]
Straightened 9 cw, also adjusted the contrast.

Because the image was straightened I then had to clone and crop.
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New Zealand
Title: Living DinosaurSony Cybershot DSC-F828
Living Dinosaur (14)
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Irfanview
Irfanview
LordPotty Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1449 W: 146 N: 3764] (12035) [2005-06-20 09:32:33] [2]
I've used Irfanview (a wee viewer I use) to adjust light and colour levels here. I've also cropped a wee bit off the sides and top.
Hope you like it like this. Steve
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New Zealand
Title: Wet featherSony Cybershot DSC-F828
Wet feather (19) *
sway Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 85 N: 308] (1224)

Off centred the feather.
Off centred the feather.
Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 148 N: 6113] (18648) [2005-06-20 04:23:02] [4]
I changed the position of the feather so it isn't so centred. I had to first crop off a bit from the top, before rotating it a bit at a time. I think the feather looks better on an angle, rather than straight on. I hope you l.ike it. Cheers
Janice
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