W1: Crop only; re-comp.

My Home is in the Tree
Photo Information
Copyright: Bob Airhart (bobair) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 75 N: 1116] (4152)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-04-15
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Edited by: Jay Meeuwig (Shoot_Score) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 473 W: 318 N: 682] (2356)
Edited Image Upload Date: 2007-04-21 14:41:57
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon EOS 30d, Canon 100-400L 4.5-5.6 IS USM
Exposure: 9.0, 1/500 seconds
Workshop Note
"so how can I take the shot to make it better?..."

Try to use the thirds rule.
One third b/g above the bird.
Two thirds for bird , one each for head & neck...

Remove some of the lighter brighter area on the right, likewise , throw away parts at bottom...

I know it hurts sometimes to remove nice parts
but it sure focusses the view...

What say you?
Note: I have tried to place the bird's head on the diagonal from LL to UR...
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