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| Workshop Note |
I thought compo could be improved so here is what I tried and why: Not much happening on the left side and the remainder of the branch at the top is centrally placed and draws the eye too much for my taste.
Cropped to provide a more balanced composition that clearly puts the focus on the bird, in particular the head. The remainder of the branch is placed near the frame in a less prominent position so it serves more as a pointer to the head than away from it.
Regards,
Gabi |
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