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I thought that the picture had too much useless space. That made the composition not strong enough. I know you wanted to show the Spanish summer, but I think there's too much free space in a picture. When you look at the picture your eye should focus on some important point (I guess on bugs) and not wonder around whole picture seeking something interesting to look at. I found my eye wondering and looking for some strong element of the composition. I've seen your other picture of the bugs and I think the framing is better there, but there's too little space now ;-) I tried to make something in middle, left some space but crop a bit too.
I must admit I find this picture very difficult to frame. The bugs poses are a little untidy ;-) |
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