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Glint Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 39 W: 0 N: 50] (313)
A spider wove a fine curtain through the gorse. Moisture on a foggy day shows up this craetion

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Glint Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 39 W: 0 N: 50] (313)
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Edited by:sily Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 238 W: 6 N: 391] (1893)

I think you should do a different kind of composition, to make spiderweb stand out more so that we are not distracted by flowers that are just BG details and are not so important as the central motive of the web. I think it's way better to spread the web across the whole photo and our screens looks stronger.