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euk (11) [2007-10-12 14:03]

Ugly and futile: lean neck and thick hair and a stain of ink, a snail's
bed. Yet someone had loved him, borne him in her arms and in her heart.
But for her the race of the world would have trampled him underfoot, a
squashed boneless snail. She had loved his weak watery blood drained from
her own. Was that then real? The only true thing in life? His mother's
prostrate body the fiery Columbanus in holy zeal bestrode. She was no
more: the trembling skeleton of a twig burnt in the fire, an odour of
rosewood and wetted ashes. She had saved him from being trampled
underfoot and had gone, scarcely having been. A poor soul gone to heaven:
and on a heath beneath winking stars a fox, red reek of rapine in his fur,
with merciless bright eyes scraped in the earth, listened, scraped up the
earth, listened, scraped and scraped.
Sitting at his side Stephen solved out the problem. He proves by
algebra that Shakespeare's ghost is Hamlet's grandfather. Sargent peered
askance through his slanted glasses. Hockeysticks rattled in the
lumberroom: the hollow knock of a ball and calls from the field.
Across the page the symbols moved in grave morrice, in the mummery
of their letters, wearing quaint caps of squares and cubes. Give hands,
traverse, bow to partner: so: imps of fancy of the Moors. Gone too from
the world, Averroes and Moses Maimonides, dark men in mien and
movement, flashing in their mocking mirrors the obscure soul of the
world, a darkness shining in brightness which brightness could not
comprehend.
Do you understand now? Can you work the second for yourself? Yes, sir.
In long shaky strokes Sargent copied the data. Waiting always for a
word of help his hand moved faithfully the unsteady symbols, a faint hue
of shame flickering behind his dull skin. AMOR MATRIS: subjective and
objective genitive. With her weak blood and wheysour milk she had fed him
and hid from sight of others his swaddling bands.
Like him was I, these sloping shoulders, this gracelessness. My
childhood bends beside me. Too far for me to lay a hand there once or
lightly. Mine is far and his secret as our eyes. Secrets, silent, stony
sit in the dark palaces of both our hearts: secrets weary of their
tyranny: tyrants, willing to be dethroned.

euk (11) [2007-09-27 14:13]

dear Eduard,

I feel a poem is coming out of me for this picture, too.

thank you!
soon!

euk (11) [2007-09-27 14:06]

Der Baer ist stark,
Doch du bist haerter.
Der Wald ist gruen,
Doch du bist juenger.
Das Bild ist fein,
Doch du bist famoser.
Dein Fotoaparat ist gross,
Doch du bist laenger.
Die Bibel ist lang,
Doch du schreibst mehr.

Du bist ein Traum in dunkler Nacht!
Du bist ein Held im tiefen Wald!
Du bist ein Falke des Schreibens!
Du bist die Schnecke des Bildes!
Du bist Proffessor der Perfektion!
Du bist ein Juengling der schoenen Locken!

Dieser Baer sagt alles!
Gute Nacht

euk (11) [2007-08-29 5:59]

dear snowhawk,
thank you, thank you! I've learned so much from this picture. I don't know what to do now, how to thank you! - please write me down your bank account number so I can thank you with money, too.
I would surely like to meet you one day!
thank you!!!

euk (11) [2007-05-16 3:48] [+]

Is this a White-throated Dipper or a Deep Throated?


Compositie:

Compozita este perfecta,miraculoasa,nu-mi vine sa cred ca ai putut incadra asa bine...cum ai putut sa incadrezi poza in asa fel incat cele 4 margini (miraculoase) sa fie paralele cu chenarul...ce sa mai zic ...e...e...e de vis ....

Culori:

Este incredibil cat de cololrata este aceasta fotografie alb-negru... cum ai putut captura un numar asa mare de culori...16 milioane de culori...
Este incredibil....le-ai numarat vreodata?

Contrast:


Contrastul in aceasta poza de evidentiaza in primul rand pe figura celor doi protagonisti... o data pasare care e bucuroasa, fericita ca mananca ceva iar in contrast insecta care este suparata,trista...deoarece este ultima ei zi din
viata...si va fi nevoita sa vada interiorul scarbos al pasaricii...


Oricum.... este incredibil!!!!

Expunere:


In ceea ce priveste expunerea ...este incredibila ,miraculoasa ,ce mai frate ,...perfecta.
Nu stiu de la ce distanta ai fotografiat si daca ai cropuit din fotografia originala, dar daca poti s-o printezi pe format 20x30 ar arata minunat in baie!

Folosind o diafragma F 4.00 si Shutter Speed - 1/40 seconds este rezultatul ideal pentru o asemenea expunere....este incredibil....


DOF

Senzational Diaconescu....nici nu am cuvinte Eddie draga...DOF e perfect, mirabolant....
La diafragma care ai folosit-o F4 + PS...era clar ca vei avea un asemenea DOF...Bravo...


Focusare:

Wow....ce mai focalizare...este incredibil...Ai folosit un obiectiv...doua sau nici unu...


Rama:

Rama este superba...incredibila....
O astfel de rama se potriveste excelent cu pasarica si insecta...
Rama alba simbolizeaza pasarica iar cele doua rame negre si mai subtiri simbolizeaza insecta sfasiata de durere...


Senzorul:

Este incredibil cum un senzor asa de mic a putut face o poza asa de mare...mare din toate punctele de vedere....

Totul este INCREDIBIL...BRAVO..BRAVO...


Numai bine ...si pupici....

euk (11) [2006-11-24 8:47]

if you split the points to three birds now, each gets 9 points. Is great! in future they can get more. you write a lot. better more picture than words! better divide your comment into chapters next time!

euk (11) [2006-11-23 5:54]

Let me tell you a story Snowfalken:
" Once a tiger came to me and said...I'm not a butterfly"
Think about this Snowfalken!!!

euk (11) [2006-11-23 4:43]

hi snowy! i love picture from you. you write so much and i love this too. sometimes i go to sleep reading your comments. this picture is of genius.
much bafta!