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wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 13:24]

Hi Akshay,

Well composed image with good separation from the plain background the colours of which compliment the subject well.
Exposure is well controlled with good detail in the black plumage. Not sure about the image in image though, takes something away from the main image.

Regards
Terry.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 13:20] [+]

Hi Murali,
the bird is isolated well from the background and has good colour and detail.
Composition is good the only little thing that spoils it for me is the tightness of the framing on the birds tail, looks almost like part is cut off, would be a couple of minutes fix in PS if you wanted to. Overall a fine image though, TFS.

Regards
Terry.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 13:14]

Hi Arjun,
Looks like this is quite a crop from the original image as this is very noisy, lacks detail and has been over sharpened (white halo evident around edges) to compensate. That said the composition with the bird on the diagonal works well.

Regards
Terry.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 7:51] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Tabatha,
DoF is just right giving good detail to the plumage, I feel the composition is a little lacking as more space is required to the right of the bird, to look into. The light looks a little harsh and the highlights need toning down, this could be easily done in Photoshop. Overall a fair effort.

Regards
Terry

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 7:46]

Hi Jean,
A nicely timed capture with good detail and perspective, I would like to have seen a little more space to the right for the birds to fly into, which would have given a stronger composition. Nice work though.

Regards
Terry,.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 7:42] [+]

Hi Nadeem,
you have captured the moment well, a shame you have cropped the wing tips though. Well exposed with good detail and colour, nice work.
Did you manage to capture the real action, when he made his snatch from the pond?

Regards
Terry.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-26 7:36]

Hi Luis,
The background tone compliments the colours of the bird well, nicely composed with spot on focus and good pose from the bird have combined to produce a fine image.

Regards
Terry.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2008-02-25 14:37]

Nice capture Karan, I was there on Saturday, the light was even worse but still managed some good images. They do move fast and although these are captive it is still difficult to get anything decent, so well done you. Did you manage to get any of the Weasels? cause they are even quicker, I'm sure they are on Red Bull..!!

Regards
Terry

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wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2007-12-28 5:42]

Hi Paul,
nice detailed capture of this woodpecker in classic pose, nicely controlled exposure with natural colour, thanks for sharing.

Regards
Terry.

wideload Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 3 N: 1019] (3783) [2007-12-28 5:39]

Hi Joe,
nice detailed close up, could possibly have done with a little more DoF, well controlled exposure and good colour.

Regards
Terry.