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mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-15 14:22] [+]

Sion,

Excellent color in this landscape! Now I will encourage you to upload a larger version for this one (assuming it is in a 1:2.5 ratio). Log into your photo manager and see if it gives you the option to upload a large version.

Let me know if you need help with this.

MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-15 4:50] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Wow—now that is a lot of bird! I thought the photo would be better served without the deck so I did a workshop. Hope you like it.

This is one of those times when you don't have any time to think about how to frame the photo. You are just fortunate to have had your camera at the ready to get this shot! Great reflexes.

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-09 6:33] - [workshop] [compare]

Sion,

This is a great close-up; amazing that you were able to get so close!

I made some changes to brighten up the image and posted them to a workshop.

TFS,
MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-07 7:32]

This is a nice profile shot of your gray squirrel. I like the lighting and the effect of the shadow in the BG to define his features.

TFS,
MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-06 6:19]

Helena,

Welcome to TrekNature! This is a funny image; it really does look like a skull.

I like the lighting and detail, well done.

TFS,
MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-03 10:19]

Sion,

Another wonderful stream shot—this time pulled back a but more. I like the effect, although I would have included the top of the rock at the top border of the photo.

TFS,
MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-02 18:11] [+]

Wow - looks like a loaf of bread fresh out of the oven with a background trail mix of twigs and leaves.

Amazing that they get to be as big as a volleyball.

TFS,
MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-11-02 12:28]

Sion,

The action of the water looks almost like a painting. Very nice seasonal photo indeed with Fall colors in the leaves.

The composition is nice, but you might be well served to capture a little more in the frame.

I look forward to seeing more photos from you.

TFS,
MP

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-10-29 8:29] - [workshop] [compare]

Sion,

This is a beautiful bird. The image is a little dark and you might want to consider getting the entire thing (regardless of the cage). Depending on the thickness of the cage wire your use of depth of field could render the wires invisible.

TFS,
Michael

mporterf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 60 W: 74 N: 84] (673) [2009-09-28 8:12] [+]

Ron,

The image that comes to mind is a mother and her children in a posture of protection. Well done!

TFS,
MP