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Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2007-08-20 6:27] - [workshop] [compare]

Nice shot, but may you allow me some comments :
- I would have preferred the flower to be entirely in frame (not cropped down)
- Some more light to have more bright colors.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-28 7:33]

I like the soft aspect of the flower petal, and the plastic aspect of its center. The composition here is good, nice dark BG that keep the attention to the subject and give good contrast.

However I would have appreciate a bit more DOF.

Nice shot.

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fiyo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 5 N: 3475] (15161)

Great

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-28 6:14]

Superb : the colors are wonderful, the composition is great, the DOF is good.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-28 4:40]

For sure he rocks !

Nice shot, well composed, nice DOF.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-28 4:36]

Nice macro !

I still hate spiders.....

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-27 5:30]

Good photo with good DOF, nice composition.

One little remark : seems the focus was performed on the edge of the right wing, that gives a bit soft body.

Interresting note.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-27 5:05]

Nice shot, good light. A bit more DOF could have been better.
Nice composition.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-27 5:03]

Very impressive, nice photo.

Just a remark : The rain drops on the window are a bit disturbing.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-27 3:55]

beau close-up. Bonne DOF.

Ca manque un chouilla de lumière, et la fleur est un peu sur-ex. Je epnse qu'un flash aurait pu aider.

Manu_b Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 6 N: 4] (127) [2005-10-26 9:25]

Nice composition. I like the reflections in the water drops, the texture of the leaf, and the good lightning that gives a dark BG.