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Bardzo dobry portret, ostrość i kompozycja bardzo dobra.
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Marx
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beautiful dew drops...i think it would have done better in a vertical format.
nice exposure
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Hello Biswaroop - a good shot of the ecl;ipse - well done. I live in the Southern hemisphere so we didn't see it downhere.
Looks good, thank you for sharing
Janice
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Hello Biswaroop,
This is beautiful. The darkened background took care of the busyness around the flower giving it brilliant conrast in white and yellow. Superb clarity and details and the exposure is just perfect.
Have a nice day.
Best regards,
Jusni
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Hi Biswaroop,
welcome to TE,nice first shot,good colors,
Rishabh
The bees are totally out of focus but the body of the flower is very prominent.
Hope to se some good work from you.
regards
Hi Biswaroop,
Wonderful colors in this shot. Bees are hard to get in focus because they vibrate so! Maybe try to sharpen just a bit and it would help show them off. The detail in the stamen is great also. Overall I think a good job! TFS!
Laura
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Focus is not perfectly on the bees...
Probably you nedd some PP.
Bye
Andrea
hello Biswaroop
Very good close up shot! And only using that kit-lens! I must say you have done a superb job to get this sharpness and good detail on the body, especially the direct eye contact.
Superb light! And I wonder what magic did you have to get him on the verandah? We went to tropical rainforests and trekked everywhere for hours in search of birds yet could not find them, and here you just wait at your verandah? Truly amazing.
Perhaps I have a comment - the crop of the feet, if you can avoid it please!
Good macro! No, I dont think I can get a shot like this with my D80 kitlens, unless a caged bird.
tfs, bill