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family walk

family walk
Photo Information
Copyright: Marek Ostrowski (mzungu) (103)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Mammals
Camera: Canon EOS 3, 28-135 IS f3.5-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-24 13:06
Viewed: 4868
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Amboseli National Park, Kenya, midday, 28-135mm at about 35mm, provia 100F,
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  • cloud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 497 W: 111 N: 1535] (9539)
  • [2007-04-24 13:28]

Bardzo dobre technicznie i interesujące. Zierzęta na pierwszym planie dają ciekawe wrażenie.
Pozdrawiam, Paweł

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  • Aramok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 101 N: 1501] (5166)
  • [2007-04-24 13:30]

Hi Marek

I really like the sharpness in this picture as well as the family group, but I feel that the horizon really needs to be straight or if the land is sloping down to the left, then an explanation.. also what were you doing so close to the elephants etc. The posititon of the elephants and the way the are almost walking out of the picture is great.

Half of TN is about the photographer's notes and at first it can be quite difficult to know what to say, but an explanation of why you were there, how you got to be so close and something that personalises it to you and allows those of us who have never been there to learn what to do if we were every lucky enough to get there would assist greatly.


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  • cedryk Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 967 W: 50 N: 1722] (5270)
  • [2007-04-24 13:34]

Piekna, rzeklbym klasyczna kompozycja. Mysle ze to wlasnie jeden z widokow jakie przychodza do glowy gdy mysli sie o afrykanskiej przyrodzie. Smutny widok natomiast sprawiaja te suche resztki galezi. Fajnie byloby dowiedziec sie czegos wiecej o tym miejscu i warunkach wykonania zdjecia.

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  • Nilson Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 488 W: 0 N: 566] (4423)
  • [2007-04-24 15:58]

Uma belissima foto e de qualidade exelente com boa composiçăo muito interessante esta familia passeando meus parabéns.

Hello Marek,
This is a great perspective of these elephants moving across the picture diagonally, The tilted landscape doesn't really bother me that much and it not as if the were gonna come tumbling out of the picture. I like the cattle egret hitch hiker. :)

This is a great capture Marek. It looks pretty hot and dry. I hope there was water nearby for these wonderful animals. The way they are marching towards us makes it almost 3-D. The image does need a slight rotation to the right. I tried it and the elephants and clouds do look better. Thanks for posting a super shot.

Evelynn : )

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  • marcin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 138 W: 0 N: 268] (2057)
  • [2007-04-25 17:07]

swietne, przyciaga wzrok i nie pozwala oderwac, klasyczna wciagajaca kompozycja
gratuluje i pozdrawiam

  • jignasi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2118 W: 0 N: 3424] (27917)
  • [2007-04-26 17:56]

Magnífica composición y colorido.
Abrazo desde Espańa: J. Ignasi

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