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Copyright: corrina allsop (corrina) (71)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-10-17
Categories: Mammals
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/340 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-10-18 2:54
Viewed: 3951
Points: 13
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To mrvdm1: Meerkatcorrina 1 10-31 07:48
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Welcome to TN Corrina. I love it when new locals join.

These meerkat are so cute. They look up to the sky to watch for birds of prey swooping down on them. I think your composition would improve if you crop out the right side of the meerkat and leave the space on the left for him to look into. It is a TN custom to share some information in your notes. Have a look at some other members notes to get the idea.

Nice one, thanx for sharing.

haha ca c'est une scene que je trouve trop marante, certain animaux sont vraiment des vrais commediens ! mais a quoi pensse t'il pour se comporter ainssi !
merci pour ce clichet vraiment "fun".

This would be a perfect photo if you would crop it a bit tighter and remove this fellow from the center.

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  • Callie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1101 W: 95 N: 2610] (7555)
  • [2004-10-18 14:56]

Welcom on TN, Corrina
Love this fat guy! Actually a gorgeous picture, Just crop a bit right and bottom, it eill place him more on a third and improve your visual impact alot!
I love the Pose!

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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-10-18 15:01]

Bienvenida Corrina a TN.
Siempre estos simpáticos animales llaman la atención de todos nosotros... y en este caso con una actitud y expresion realmente simpática.
Excelente agudeza, con bellos contrastes por el sol y las sombras de la escena.
Tal vez el animal se encuentre algo centrado para mi gusto.
Debes tener en cuenta la recomendacion de incluir notas junto con tus fotos.
Recuerda participar con tus críticas a las imágenes de otros usuarios para el crecimiento de TrekNature.

Welcome to TN Corrina.
Always these likeable animals call the attention of all we... and in this case with an attitude and really likeable expression.
Excellent sharpness, with beautiful contrast by the sun and the shades of the scene.
Perhaps the animal is something centered for my pleasure.
You must consider the recommendation to include notes along with your photos.
Remember you to participate with your critics to the images of other users for the growth of TrekNature.

Welcome to TN, Corina. Great image you have here. This fellow is in the "limelight".
It would be nice if you wrote a short note with your post.

D'accord avec les autres en ce qui concerne le cadrage et la note accompagnatrice. J'ai fait un petit 'workshop' sur ton image. Bienvenue sur TN, Corrina.

Corrina, I'm also still new at this, but learning all the time. You manage to capture a good pose, and I go with Gerhard on the spacing. Japie will convert you if he sees this, but that is how we learn. I did a workshop on this shot, cropped it a bit and changed the contrast, brightness and a bit of hue. Hope I helped you in achieving something.

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