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Striped Swallow

Striped Swallow
Photo Information
Copyright: Eyal Bartov (bartove) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 1 N: 588] (7772)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon EOS 1V, Canon EF100-400 IS
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-04 9:39
Viewed: 4598
Points: 21
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Striped Swallow (Hirundo adyssinica)18 cm
East and Canterl Africa
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  • taba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 466 W: 124 N: 312] (1847)
  • [2005-12-04 12:16]

HI Eyal
Great photo !
fantastic colours of the birds (swallows)
Very good composition and DOF.
well done.

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  • twin Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 244 W: 17 N: 494] (3259)
  • [2005-12-04 13:13]

wonderful colors everywhere...
sky, and the birds...
beautifully composed with the branch..
great shot Eyal...

Hi Eyal

Beautiful shot. Perfectly composed show the two beautiful birds. Lovely BG colour and the shape of the branches are fantastic. Nice work. TFS.

Hello Eyal. Very good shot. Great POV and very good details. Excellent colours. Thanks for sharing.

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  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1538 W: 5 N: 2240] (12636)
  • [2005-12-04 15:24]


Les oiseaux sont superbes et la composition est très jolie.

Merci belle prise nature.


Great photograph. The colours are really nice well done.

My only critique would be the writing on the photograph. Maybe put the writing on the frame.

Nice shot and TFS

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  • ridfa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 89 W: 0 N: 376] (4111)
  • [2005-12-05 0:27]

J'aime beaucoup la composition de ton image et pour moi, c'est la première fois que j'ai l'occasion de voir cet espèce d'hirondelles. TFS

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2005-12-05 3:48]

Wow, Eyal. This is a first for me. I have never seen swallows in those colors. Great job on the composition. Sharp details and gorgeous colors. Well done and TFS. : )

A new species for me, very nice.
Good composition and colours. i lik ethe background and contrast of the swallow plumage.

This is a fantastic shot. The colours are amazing together. Very well done.


Fantastic photo & wonderfull colours..

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