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Black-headed Oriole

Black-headed Oriole
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Copyright: Biswarup Satpati (Biswarup) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 243 W: 0 N: 868] (8282)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2016-12-15
Categories: Birds
Camera: Sony DSC-HX400V
Exposure: f/5.8, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2016-12-15 3:49
Viewed: 1635
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Scientific Name: Oriolus xanthornus
Alternate: Black-headed Oriole
Assamese: সখিয়তী
Bengali: Holde pakhi (হলদে পাখি) Isti kutum (ইষ্টি কুটুম), Bene bou (বেনে বউ).
Bhojpuri: पिरोला
Gujarati: કાળા માથાનો પીલક, શ્યામશિર પીલક
Kannada: ಕರಿಮಂಡೆ ಅರಿಶಿನಬುರುಡೆ
Marathi: बुरखा हळद्या, काळटोप हळद्या, पोक्काघो (कोकण भाग)
Nepali: कालोटाउके सुनचरी
Sanskrit: कालशीर्ष काञ्चन
Tamil: கருந்தலை மாங்குயில், கருந்தலை மாம்பழக் குருவி

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Hi Biswarup,
Promising scene and photo, but in my opinion the necessary post-processing wasn't done. The composition's too central, there's an huge and functionless blank space behind the oriole's back. The 2nd compositional error is at the right: lines which are running very closed to the frame parallel with them are always unpleasant to the viewers. Lights and colors: contrast is too few, colors seem a bit oversaturated. Sharpness: focus is a bit soft. Well, I demonstrate all what I said above with a workshop - probably you'll like it.
Kind regards from Ireland, László

Agree with Laszlo, Biswarup.
He has done a good workshop on your picture.

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  • tuslaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2754 W: 282 N: 4931] (19883)
  • [2016-12-15 19:46]

Hello Biswarup,
A beautiful bird indeed with bright colors and lovely markings, but I totally agree with Laszlo and Ram on this one. Amazing what a little PP can do for an image;)

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6595 W: 89 N: 15659] (65489)
  • [2016-12-16 14:13]

Hi Biswarup,i agree with the previous comment,you lost more details,maybe in a noise reduction in PP,bright colors but not your best shot. Have a nice WE and thanks,Luciano

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