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Copyright: hasan prasetyo (hasboy) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 44 W: 0 N: 20] (215)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-20
Categories: Spiders
Camera: Minolta Dimage Z2, GT Lens 1:2.8-3.7
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-09-22 20:44
Viewed: 5101
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this spider can found around my house. I found it when this spider hunting for food. this spider can eat any insect bigger than their body.
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  • RAP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2524 W: 345 N: 2373] (7405)
  • [2004-09-23 11:16]

Bonita captura Hasan.
Excelente definicion y agudeza, con una mirada impactante.
Buen colorido y perspectiva con encuadre un tanto centrado.
Intenta incluir algo más de informacion en tus notas, ya sea de la especie de animal o de las condiciones de la captura.

Pretty capture Hasan.
Excellent definition and sharpness, with an impressive glance.
Good colorful and perspective with frame somewhat centered.
You trie to include something more of information in your notes, or of the animal species or the conditions of the capture.

Hasan, I believe this is a tiny jumping spider, Family Salticidae. You've captured the large eyes well, a distinctive characteristic of this spider. Since I see no EXIF data from your camera I don't know what f-stop you used. You might have improved this macro with a smaller aperture. I like this angled composition.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2004-09-23 13:13]

Ha, I love it. Great shot Hasan, excellent focus on those big eyes. Good work. I think you should be including a bit more of a note. This spider belongs to the family Salticidae, I'm not sure of genus and species.

Beautiful photo, those eyes get out the screen to look at me!
And the texture of this rock as background is lovely, very nice work.

Nice one Hasan. The eyes shows really well. Your note needs a little more information though.

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  • Kay Silver Star Critiquer [C: 16 W: 0 N: 26] (86)
  • [2004-10-27 19:10]

Nice perspective , it add good motion to this "hunting" spider

Very good capture
good shot
good focus on those big eyes
well done

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