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White Spider


White Spider
Photo Information
Copyright: Ronald Alarcon (Ronald) (16)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-22
Categories: Spiders
Camera: Canon PowerShot A95
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-11-14 0:58
Viewed: 22659
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I'm watering my plants when saw this white Spider wating on his prey.
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  • Shaver (100)
  • [2005-11-14 1:12]
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Very interesting subject for your first photo. I will comment on your composition only; The right side of your photo detracts from your photo (wasted space). Try to crop this photo only to include the spider and some of the leaf. This will result in a more impressive photo and force your viewer to see your object (the little white spider). When you compose a shot it is recommended that your subject is moving into the frame - look into the rule of thirds for more about this. I hope that you find my comments helpful and I look forward to more of your post.

Again welcome to Trek Nature.

Welcome to TN

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  • jossim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1538 W: 5 N: 2240] (12636)
  • [2005-11-14 21:47]

Bonjour Ronald!

Une première présentation avec une belle prise de vue d'un sujet interessant. À mon avis le sujet est légèrement flou et il manque un peu de contraste au niveau des couleurs.

Félicitations et merci pour l'envoie!

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