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I'am the leaf


I'am the leaf
Photo Information
Copyright: Matthew Bird (Matt-Bird) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 33 N: 400] (1942)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-03
Categories: Spiders
Camera: Nikon D70S, Tamron SP AF180mm F/3.5 DI MACRO 1:1
Exposure: f/18.0, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-06 9:39
Viewed: 3903
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This little spider was a good subject it didn't want to move. I think my flash was a bit strong(my flash is my stun gun). I did try to lower the flashes settings and played with f-stops and shutter speed but it did darken the image to much I thought. The photo was taken around dusk so there was not alot of light. If anyone has any good flash tips they would like to share I would appreciate it thanks.

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  • Luce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 80 W: 0 N: 15] (58)
  • [2006-04-06 9:42]

Bonjour, très beau close-up. L'image est très sharp et l'exposition parfaite. La composition suivant la règle des tiers est bien équilibrée. Le fond noir dirige toute notre attention sur l'insecte. Bravo pour cette belle image.

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2006-04-06 9:57]
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Hi Matthew!
I like mood of this photography - green darkness. Composition and details are very good. Is this some kind of crab spider? Nice work!

Hello Matthew,
Very nice shot! The spider is very simmilar to our flower crab spiders. Picture has great POV, very good details and framing too. I think you did well on the exposure and the use of flash is not bad at all.
WELL DONE!

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  • Aramok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 896 W: 101 N: 1501] (5166)
  • [2006-04-06 10:14]
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I think it has come out really well.

One flash tip I picked up a couple of months ago, tissues - you can put them over the flash gun, each layer will act as a diffuser... just add or separate as needed..

hello Matthew,
Very nice and interesting nocturnal shot.
I love the composition, colours, flash use and details
Regards
Hernán

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  • thor68 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 795 W: 138 N: 1319] (5674)
  • [2006-04-06 10:39]

hi matt,
excellent capture! :-)
the flash seems to put enough light on the details
and "darkens" the bg nicely.
composition & pov are great.
well done, thor.

Hi Matthew,
very best shot.
congratulation

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2006-04-07 10:43]

I think that is a great presentation and POV of this spider, hanging on upside down to the tip of that leaf.
Very sharp details and good exposure.
The composition is excellent. TFS, Matt. : )

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  • ddg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 867 W: 24 N: 1008] (5507)
  • [2006-04-10 6:24]

Hello Matthew, I like the composition of this shot. Bright colors and good details, very well done. TFS, Didier.

Hi, Matthew.
Great shot. Wonderful pose. It seems that he wants to say that all this leave belongs to him now. Good DOF, colors and nice background.

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  • BHo Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 0 N: 20] (99)
  • [2006-04-20 7:49]

Wicked specimen here. This fella looks like he's ready for action. Good composition however you could probably improve the lighting even more once you learn to experiment with your flash.

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