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Photo Information
Copyright: Kiril Todorov (Phoki) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 21] (284)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-04-04
Categories: Spiders
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Pisauridaes (Nurseryweb spiders). [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-04-06 3:54
Viewed: 4111
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Nersery spider with normal white balance!
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Its a nice detail side view, Kiril. I think more impact would be added if you changed your POV to include the facial features as well. Nice composition with strong diagonal. Very well done.

  • Great 
  • puciu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 469 W: 0 N: 16] (2631)
  • [2005-04-06 12:57]
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Kiril! Very good macro, good frame and excellent sharpness.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-04-06 15:54]
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Good shot Kiril, yes the WB is good this time! The pose is nice and I like the POV. The lighting is also attractive although I'd love it more if there were a little sparkle in the odd eye or two. Good work.

  • Great 
  • naki Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 382 W: 27 N: 5] (40)
  • [2005-04-06 16:08]
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That's a very nice composition Kiril. My only nit is the non-focussed eye of the spider. Eyes are the most important parts of the insect photos which gives us a "feeling" about those strange creatures.

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 289 W: 0 N: 339] (1351)
  • [2005-04-06 17:43]
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Nice macro shot Kiril, clarity, details and nice composed too. Well done, TFS.

Great shot I like the light and the subject position. You just framed it a bit too centered.
Well done.

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