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Copyright: laurent crouzier (marmottelolo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1769 W: 424 N: 2889] (14697)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-10
Categories: Birds
Camera: Konica Minolta Dimage Z3
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/40 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Birds: Blackbirds - Turdus merula [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-13 12:11
Viewed: 4577
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
bonjour a tous.
apres le rouge gorge voici le merle encore plus rapide,juste je temps de se poser pour casser une petite graine,un coup d'oeil vers moi et au revoir.
je n'ai pas eu le temps de le cadrer en entier alors je vous le propose en portrait.


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  • Great 
  • Dando Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 637 W: 32 N: 792] (3084)
  • [2006-01-13 12:15]

Nice composition, detail and colour. Well done and TFS.
Dean.

Et c'est un bon portrait, Laurent ! Doux, pourtant assez dièse donnez les bons détails de l'oiseau.

Salut, Petru

Simply Perfect!

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Hi,
Great detail, colour and composition!
Well done!
Ana:)

Very nice shot Laurent,
I like the POV and framing of this picture. The bright BG is a bit distracting, but still the details of dark feathers are well visible.
I like it.
WELL DONE!

Hi Laurent,
a pretty blackbird with good sharpness.
Good shot with your Dimage Z3 - I also have this camera and I like it.
Bye
Sabine - wishnugaruda

  • Great 
  • klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719)
  • [2006-01-13 18:05]

Hello Laurent,
I like the triangle formed by BG and bird with the eye the highest point and the two sides ending in the left and right edges of the frame. Not a classical Rule of Thirds type composition but it works well here and I really like it.
Regards,
Gabi

  • Great 
  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2006-01-13 18:11]

Joli portrait, c'est net et bien cadré. Peut-être un peu sous-ex au niveau du cou mais une belle réussite. Merci.

Mario

Nice capture Laurent,
Good detail, colours and DOF.
Composition and exposure are good. Good framing and POV.
Thanks for posting, Have a great weekend.

Nice shot Laurent. Good detail and POV. I would leave a bit more space over the head.
Well done & have a Great Weekend!

  • Great 
  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2006-01-17 20:41]

Laurent, a very beautiful, a very nice photo.

I like composition and pov. Lovely catchlight.

Maybe, a little bit more of sharpness, but it's just an opinion.

  • Great 
  • Nico Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 199 W: 1 N: 335] (1321)
  • [2006-01-18 6:43]

Good clean shot of black bird against the white background. I know how difficult this is to also show some detail in die feathers. You did well.

si tu crois qu'il ne t'a pas vu !!!!!
c' est un oiseau très rapide et craintif
enfin pour dire encore une belle réussite
bravo jeune homme
ALAIN

Hi Laurent,
A strong composition, with a dominating profile!
I like the dynamics, the bird captured with good DOF giving nice textures in the feather coat...
Greetings,
Pablo -

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