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Copyright: myold profile (gondox) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 356 W: 65 N: 342] (1585)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-22
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon D40 DSLR, Pentacon 500mm f/5.6, Digital RAW 200
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): My own bird shots [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-07-27 4:53
Viewed: 4024
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another one

Another one from the Berény trip, maybe you'll like this one more...
I tried to desaturate the fence to be less "ugly" :)
Still it isn't very nice...
I hope you like the bird itself...

Have a nice day,
Andor

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HI Andor,

We sometimes have to put up with whats in the background, but that dosen't distract from a good shot of the Spotted Flycatcher. Good focus and dof, good natural colours and good oof bg.

TFS regards Bill

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  • shree Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 49 W: 13 N: 71] (276)
  • [2009-07-27 6:56]

Hey Andor, this one is really very nice! Your model is very cute, I must say. The soft yellow colours look so nice. The background is perfectly blurred, sharpness and contrast adequate - also the details are clearer in this one.
Very nice capture, overall.

Andor:
I am very fond of this species, and the fence is a typical perch - so no problem there. I think I would have cropped a little from the left side of the image, and I have suggested a slight exposure adjustment in a workshop - I hope you don't mind (I think I may have lightened it a little too much, but if I was working with the original I would have been more selective)? I think this is an attractive image.
Nigel.

Hey Bro!
Sup?
This time you took a real long one!
An awesome shot!
Simply love the sharpness and the details...
Bravo!
Goldy

Hi Andor,

Very nice capture of this little bird. Very nice PoV and very clear and sharp image. Very well done

TFS,
Kedar

Hello Andor
What a beautiful shot of this nice bird, great details and superb pose
the colors of thr bird and the BG are wonderful
very well done
Jacqueline

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 957 W: 0 N: 1329] (6264)
  • [2009-07-31 12:02]

Hello Andor,
Kitűnő fogás!
Szép hétvégét,
Adrian

Hello Andor,
a beuatiful capture of this bird (a Spotted Flycatcher juvenile) taken from a good POV with very good sharpness in a nice composition.
TFS
Best regards
Maurizio

Szia Andor!

Ez a kép így, ahogy van is remek, kerítéssel együtt. Engem legalábbis nem zavar a drót. Az élesség kitűnő, a színek, a fények / árnyak szintén - nekem a Te változatod tetszik jobban, nem a WS. Lehetne okoskodni arról, hogy a madarat a bal harmadba kellett volna komponálni, hogy befelé nézzen a képbe, ne ki abból - de inkább azt mondom, boldog lennék, ha nekem lenne egy ilyen madárfotóm. Összességében nagyon tetszik a képed, grat és tfs.

Köszönöm véleményed a májgombás fotóról. Semmi baj azzal, hogy - mint mondtad - a szakmai (mármint mikológiai) részhez nem tudsz hozzászólni, semelyikünk sem gomba-szakellenőr (én is csak októberben vizsgázom a középfokún). Sokat tanulok abból is, ha csak fotós szemmel véleményezed, a kép erényeit és hibáit egyaránt. Nagyon jól esik, hogy a "szépségeim" tetszenek valakinek, és minden meglátásért hálás vagyok.

Nem tudom, ma töltök-e fel, vagy holnap, de balatoni fotó lesz. :) Baráti üdv, Laci

Nice shot. The shallow dof and the lush green bg look beautiful.

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2791 W: 0 N: 6696] (25839)
  • [2009-09-02 7:57]

Hi Andor,
thanks for liking my fungi shot. this one is an interesting composition. Bresides having the bird in attractive pose, the sharpness is very good. i like the way you exploit the fence to give a good visual effect.
Excellent piece of presentation.

Regards,
Foozi

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