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I must depilate myself!


I must depilate myself!
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Copyright: Joanna Wieczorek (cafecrem) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1201 W: 60 N: 1392] (9248)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-12
Camera: Olympus 740UZ
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 40 points or more (Chapter 5)., 50-60 points chapter 3 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-06-14 3:43
Viewed: 4342
Points: 60
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Next photo from our great walk around a moor in Rabien. It is great place. Sitting on a meadow you can see unusual world of a nature.

This pretty butterfly came to me when I had found and eat wild strawberries on the meadow after long, great walk!

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  • radz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 598 W: 11 N: 72] (436)
  • [2005-06-14 4:16]
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Another beautiful butterfly.Contrast of b/g and fly works well here.

Wow, another magnificent shot Joanna. Beautiful b'fly with tack sharp details and excellent light. Nice work. Thanks.

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  • ian Gold Star Critiquer [C: 65 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-06-14 4:52]

Hi Joanna!
Great photo. Wonderful colours. Pretty photo.

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  • CTP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 6 N: 946] (2726)
  • [2005-06-14 4:59]

Hi Joanna,
You have a very nice Macro photo here.I like how you captured it so focused.Nice POV and frame work.TFS
CT

Hi Joanna, sharpen and colors are very beautiful.
Excellent work. Thanks.

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  • red45 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
  • [2005-06-14 6:01]

Soft and shaggy, would be perfect as dustcleaner ;-) I like warm tones of your picture Joanna, deep greens and orange spot on insect's wing. Bitterflies are very hard to capture so I apprieciate your hard work :o)

A beautiful butterfly here.
You have got good light and good details.
But, I feel that there could be a little bit of improvement in focusing in this shot.

Anyway a nice take...TFS

Very nice capture of this little beauty Joanna. Very nice colours, excellent sharpness/dof, a little too dark but it could be the monitor I am using since I am not at home. Personally I would prefer the butterfly more out of centre.

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-06-14 6:31]

Hello Joanna!
Very nice capture.Details,BG,framing and composition are perfect.TFS...:-)

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2005-06-14 6:49]

Yes, she is a bit hairy isn't she? Great shot Joanna against the blurred BG. Well done. What a great place to visit.

Hello!
Very nice composition,beautiful colours.Well done!
TFS!

A great capture Joanna, it looks so soft, like suede.
Great pov and detail.
Thanks for posting.

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 289 W: 0 N: 339] (1351)
  • [2005-06-14 6:59]

wooow... superb shot Joanna, what a lovely colours! Very well captured! Good POV, DOF and details! Well done ... Thanks for sharing! :)

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  • sAner Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1455 W: 74 N: 1426] (4750)
  • [2005-06-14 6:59]

Another fine macro from your hand Joanna. Superb colors, sharp details and well composed. BG is great too. Well done & TFS!

Regards,
Pieter

Hello Joanna!
Very nice butterfly close up.Details,lighting,framing and composition are perfect.Thanks for sharing.

very nice shot Joanna,
when I am honest I have to say that pov can be done better, maybe a little to much critique, but even the shot is very good, good composition, I think it can be hold out of the middle, maybe thats better, but thats personal,very good job
gr. Jaap

Beautiful macro Joanna with excellent details revealing the texture of wings which I love to see on BF. Maybe a little to the left for composition. Well done.

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  • edji Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 83 W: 8 N: 22] (426)
  • [2005-06-14 9:22]

Nice macro. Could be better if you decenter the subject to the left side.

The contrast is excellent as well as the focusing.. great shot really!

Great macro Joanna! Excellent details, colors, light, DOF and sharpness..Only tiny nit is as stated to take it off center a bit..Very well done!

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-06-14 12:33]

Joanna, maybe focus is a little bit soft, but that's no problem.

Excellent colors and composition, and it's great to check you've been doing a great job shooting insects too.

Very nice capture Joanna,
Good detail, colours, sharpness and nice POV.
Well composed. And finally mmmmmmmmmmm wild strawberries.
Thanks for posting.

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  • naki Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 382 W: 27 N: 5] (40)
  • [2005-06-14 15:17]

Hi Joanna, this is a very nice capture. Very good natural lighting and composition. The focus is a wee-bit soft to me, but the butterfly looks very nice in the middle of those greens.
Well done.

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 751 W: 31 N: 20] (5100)
  • [2005-06-14 15:53]

I znów udane polowanie, Joanno. Motyl ładnie zapozował, dobre kolory i kompozycja. Zauważyłem, że niektóre gatunki s± wredne gdy chcesz aby rozłożyły skrzydełka. Może i racja, lepiej pokazać buĽkę niż plecy. Dobra robota.
Pozdr. Al.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-06-14 16:33]

Hi Joanna, nice shot. I'm not sure I understand the title :-0. Very nice details and colours, perhaps the comsposition is a little too centred for my tastes. Well done.

witah:D bardzo podoba mi sie kompozycja i masz racje trzeba sie troszke wydepilowac:D swietna robota:D podoba sie:D

pozd:)

Malgosia

You can almost count every hair on this lovely butterfly. The colors are so soft and pretty, the background green a nice contrast. Well done.

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  • olar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 137 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-06-15 3:50]

Ależ piekny. Bardzo ladne zdjecie z tymi wszystkimi wloskami.

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  • TAZ Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2241 W: 47 N: 3167] (10926)
  • [2005-06-15 8:06]
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Superbe papillon bien mis en valeur dans cette belle macro. Jolies couleurs, bon point de vue et bonne netteté.
Another beautiful butterfly in this interesting & well done macro !

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  • phlr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1237 W: 130 N: 882] (2821)
  • [2005-06-17 6:31]

Great shot of a Coenonympha pamphilus!

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