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dark day


dark day
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Copyright: Mn Gl (marjan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 459 W: 14 N: 366] (2685)
Genre: Plants
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-20
Categories: Trees
Camera: Minolta Dimage Z1
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-03-27 11:07
Viewed: 3775
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
last days are very cloudy and dark. This is one of them.
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To Evelynn: hi Evelinmarjan 1 03-27 14:33
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Un árbol que espera la llamada de la primavera para despertarse y lucir sus mejores galas.
Saludos Marjan, JL.

You did manage to capture the cloudy dullness of the day. If that was the intent, then you did it. If however you wanted to create a photo that has some more depth and impact, I would choose to do a little enhancement to increase the value range which would add more depth and interest to the whole. I do think you chose a nice subject, with nice angled lines. The isolated tree is nice though a bit too centered to add much energy to the composition. I tried a workshop, not on the composition but on the value range.

TFS
Evelynn : )

Hi Marjan, lovely composition with a beautiful tree and nice landscape, soft delicate colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

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