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Copyright: Dongan Parmitu (siantarman) (40)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-03
Categories: Birds
Camera: Nikon D70 Infrared, Nikkor AF-S 70-200mm f2.8 IF-ED VR, @ ISO 200
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-04 3:50
Viewed: 3727
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Still same locatioan as my previous pfiture.
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so sweet and cute photo;-))

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  • klemmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 302 W: 40 N: 484] (1719)
  • [2006-06-04 14:12]

Hi Dongan,
welcome to TN! You start with beautiful portrait shots of these sparrows, here the female. DOF nicely managed with the blurred BG isolating the subject, which is tack sharp. A bit more space in the direction that the bird is looking in would be nice. Only other nit: the (almost) missing note (the idea is to learn about nature through photography). Otherwise a great post, well done!
Regards,
Gabi

Bonita captura. El pájaro se ve bastante relajado, Hi!, Saludos. JL

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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2006-06-05 0:39]

A warm welcome to TN, Dongan.
A very sharp capture of that sparrow.
Very cute expression and good POV.
Composition-wise, it might be better if you could move the bird more to the right, so that it has more space to look into.
A great shot.
TFS. : )

Hi Dongan

Great shot. Good compo with nice light. Well done. TFS.

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