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crans montana
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Copyright: Reina Heuven (reina) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 257 W: 1 N: 330] (2032)
Genre: Landscapes
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07
Categories: Mountain
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-07-09 10:39
Viewed: 3973
Points: 37
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Yersterday I did a landscape post, now from an angle with flowers in front, wonder if the foreground is chosen too large, dont feel sure with lanscape shots yet, from last post had good comments so hope to get a better learning curve by posting shots like this.
Reina

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  • trinko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 587 W: 78 N: 322] (4321)
  • [2007-07-09 11:50]

good composition with the flowers in the front and the mountains in the back. good colors, focus is a little soft

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  • pvb Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 385 W: 16 N: 531] (1981)
  • [2007-07-09 12:35]
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Hi Reina,
Prachtig landschap. Dit jaar met vakantie in Nederland gebleven, maar ik heb de bergen met de bloemenweiden, besneeuwde toppen en de blauwe meren wel gemist. Dit is een hele goede compositie, mooie kleuren en prachtige wolkenpartij.
gr. Paula

Hallo Reina,

Dit jaar reeds in februari met vakantie in Zwitserland geweest. Daardoor hebben wij de bloemenweiden wel gemist. Normaal gaan mijn vrouw en ik eind mei, begin juni. Dan zijn de bloemen op zijn mooist. Dit is een hele goede compositie, mooie kleuren en prachtige wolkenpartij. Maar.....het meertje komt niet echt over. Is er iets mee gebeurd? Bewerkt of zo?

Hi Reina,
Much better choice of foreground than yesterdays posting, again same issues of focus as before, hyperfocal needed. I agree with you the, foreground is a little to large, I would have liked to have seen more of the sky. How about choosing a much lower position to shoot from, almost on the ground, this would have reduced the amount of foreground you would see, also you would have been closer to the flowers for more detail and finally you would have been able to include more of the sky without changing your focal length.

Best wishes
Marc.

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-07-09 20:25]

Hello Reina

A lovely alpine landscape.The wild flowers in the foreground are beautiful.The lake is wonderful,the puffy white clouds and their shadows are fantastic and the awesome scenery of the mountains are super.TFS

Rob

Excellent composition. I think this will look fantastic if you use a small aperture (large DOF) and focus on the flowers in the foreground.

Hello Reina,
The colourful field in the front is a good lead-in to the vista of mountains and lake!
A well composed image with good colours...
Maybe I could wish for a bit better sharpness, either in fron or in the back?
Greetings,
Pablo -

Bonjour,
Intéressante succession de plans.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

good composition with wild flowers,lovely landscape.

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2007-07-10 2:44]

Hello Reina,
Another great landscape.POV,composition and visual impact are excellent.Have a great day!
TFS..:-)

Hi Reina,
A beautifully composed landscape. Very good lighting and colors. Excellent work. Thanks a lot for sharing.

Hoi Reina,
Vanuit Noorwegen (Rosendal) even naar je foto's gekeken. Deze is best goed. Een beetje bont misschien. Eens met een beetje veel voorgrond, is het wel scherp? Kan dat op het scherm hier niet zo goed beoordelen. Verder ziet het het er qua compositie prima uit.
Groet, Ruud

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  • loot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5524 W: 722 N: 4163] (11276)
  • [2007-07-12 20:54]
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Hi Reina

Congratulations with this lovely scenic capture. Since I am not much of a landscape photographer I always like to see nice landscapes and learn from other photographers.

Unfortunately you did not supply any camera details so I don't really know how to give any technical advice or what suggestions to make for possible improvements. For example, what was the aperture setting as this would explain maybe why the DOF did not capture perfect details throughout the depth range of the image? Was the camera mounted on a tripod as this might have given you the opportunity to improve on the aperture setting thus achieving a much greater DOF?

I assume you shot this with the D200 so I am sure that you should be able to include the exif data with your postings. However, if you make use of the "Save for web" selection in Photoshop, then it actually deletes the exif data of the file. For that reason it is better to rather use the "Save as" function, but that makes the control of the file size a little trickier. Anyway, you could still provide some manual info on your posting as TN gives you the opportunity to supply "Exposure" info like the "F-Stop" and "Shutter speed" as well as details such as "Tripod" or "(Fill) Flash" during the upload process.

I like the flowers you included in the foreground as it really leads the eye deeper into the composition where it can discover all the other beautiful features of the mountain range, the extraordinary coloured lake, and the lovely sky. Although you could have perhaps include a little more sky in the shot in order to equal out on the 1/3 rule. The colours are great and the exposure was well managed.

Well done and TFS.
Regards
Loot

Bonjour Reina.
Trés belle image de ce beau paysage.Amitié

Hi, Reina.
Very nice view. I have to visit this place sometimes. And I think you have succeeded in composition. And you probably can make it look even better with levels manipulation and sharpening.

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1515 W: 18 N: 3165] (11638)
  • [2007-10-21 6:34]

Hi Reina

Lovely view, well composed and with great colours. Nice POV

TFS

Karan

Dear Reina
What a great scene you captured,
Perfect DOF,lighting and sharpness,
Welldone.

Good Luck
Fartash

Hi Reina!

While a thick layer of fog coveres my homeland today, I get my sunrays from this picture.

Thank you for that!

The colors are superb, the lighting is fine, too, and I like that low point of view.

Kind regards

Markus

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2791 W: 0 N: 6696] (25839)
  • [2009-01-27 17:48]

Hi Reina,
this is a very captivating shot of a landscape. The beauty is very outstanding. You managed to present it wonderfully. The foreground of pretty yellow flowers really allow the eyes to venture into a more perspective of the lake and mountains. Very nicely composed of balanced light and tones. the clouds bring in dramatic features to your shot. Really make feel standing there , watching the view and then I would rolled around the plains thinking of beautiful life.
Really pleasant shot. Thanks.

Regards,
Foozi

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