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I'm Waiting For You!


I'm Waiting For You!
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Copyright: Grzegorz Wieczorek (red45) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2636 W: 74 N: 9091] (31094)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08
Categories: Spiders
Camera: Olympus 740UZ
Exposure: f/4.6, 1/800 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-03-18 3:49
Viewed: 4918
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Trophy from Crimean Penisula - unknown to me spider. Because I can't ID him and write note, today piece of poetry from The Cure :-)

on candystripe legs spiderman comes
softly through the shadow of the evening sun
stealing past the windows of the blissfully dead
looking for the victim shivering in bed
searching out fear in the gathering gloom and
suddenly! a movement in the corner of the
room! and there is nothing i can do when i
realise with freight that the spiderman is having
me for dinner tonight
quietly he laughs and shaking his head creeps
closer now closer to the foot of the bed and
softer than shadow and quicker than flies his
arms are all around me and his tongue in my
eyes "be still be calm be quiet now my precious
boy don't struggle like that or i will only love
you more for it's much too late to get away or
turn on the light the spiderman is having you
for dinner tonight"

and i feel like i'm being eaten by a thousand
million shivering furry holes and i know that in
the morning i will wake up in the shivering cold
and the spiderman is always hungry...

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Wonderful photo remainding wonderful holidays!
I would like to be there now!

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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2005-03-18 4:15]

Good shot Greg!Green blurred bg makes the photo very attractive
I liked the composition...TFS

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2005-03-18 4:33]
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Hi Greg, the spider is a Nursery Web Spider Pisaura mirabilis. It looks like a youngster too. Nice shot, I like the lighting and composition. NIce work.

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  • AndyB Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1366 W: 32 N: 1351] (3982)
  • [2005-03-18 4:45]

A nice artistic looking shot Greg.
lovely detail and colours with nice lighting.
A good capture,well done.

Is this a relation to Steve's spider from yesterday? Nice summery plant - not so nice spider. But yes, well caught Greg. I don't like spiders.

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  • sAner Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1455 W: 74 N: 1426] (4750)
  • [2005-03-18 6:41]

DOF & POV are excellent. Details are good and colors are nice. Note is good aswell. TFS Greg!

Greg, Composed well a nice light effect from the backside..I see these bug photos & it makes me itch to get at the bugs/spiders again. Soon, very soon! TFS

good shot!was the spider planning to bunjee jump?good details, on the plant and spider.well done!

Fantastic light in this shot Grzegorz, its very pleasant on the eye...very nice and well done.

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  • Toni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 403 W: 2 N: 316] (2034)
  • [2005-03-18 17:36]

Belle mise en valeur de cette plante. Les couleurs sont très belles. Ah! Il y a une araignée, oui c'est bien ça. Elle est superbe
Salutations Toni

Great shot Greg, I love this light. Good details.
Well done.
TFS.

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  • Luc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1835 W: 301 N: 4287] (14767)
  • [2005-03-19 15:01]

Great picture, Grzegorz, especialy the light.
As I wrote to Joanna: "Here, the spring begin officially tomorrow but today we have a tremendous +6C with a brilliant sun and the snow melt, melt, melt and cafes-terraces fill, fill, fill...
Thank you!

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-03-21 21:46]

Grzegorz, I really like the dof in your pictures, and this is no exception. F/4.6 worked very well here.

Composition and lighting are great. There's some little noise on the background, but the Blur Tool would easily eliminate it.

Great shot.

Lívio

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