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Geometry of beauty


Geometry of beauty
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Copyright: Alexei Alyokhin (Alex99) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4072 W: 133 N: 7096] (23735)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-08
Categories: Insects
Camera: Konica Minolta Maxxum 7D, Sigma 70-300mm F4-5.6 APO DG Macro, Marumi MC-UV 58 mm
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/400 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-04-04 6:18
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Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 152
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I know the picture is too centered. However, I cannot do anything. I cannot cut any (nice for my taste) object. I am ready to listen to your judgments (or censures :).

Watching the shots taken with my lovely Sigma lens I have decided to undertake some efforts to repair it. I live in a very interesting (not for me) country. There is only one repair service center in Ukraine – one of the largest by size Europe country with population of 48 million people. It is located in ... ... ... Moscow (Russia). This is a sole repair center for all CIS-countries.

I think my lens deserves my efforts. I wish to gift it second life. Can I resist to our public system, which does not think of the people at all? I believe, I cannot but for the sake of my lens, I shall try to do everything that I can.
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Gailardia:
Gaillardia
Gaillardia x grandiflora

Melanargia galathea:
Marbled White
Melanargia galathea
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Add. shot info:
Exposure program: aperture priority.
Metering mode: centered weighted average.
Exposure bias value: -0.70 eV.
ISO speed: 400.
Focal length: 210 mm.
Support: monopod.
Frame: full frame.
PP: minimum PP with lost of plenty details.

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Hi alex my friend what a beatifull new post
great details very good colours and this butterfly is just amazing
thanks a lot for sharing
I will add to my favorites
best regards Toba

Hi Alex
I understand you problem here ;-) I am glad that you didnt crop anything here. Great natural labyrinth. Flowers, leafs and butterfly inside. Colors sharpness, beckground everything looks great
TFS
Krzysztof

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  • PaulH Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1137 W: 26 N: 3879] (13882)
  • [2008-04-04 6:33]

Hi Alex,
i can see why you don't want to crop any of this, there is beautiful elements all around the frame. I would simply leave it as it is and not worry! Vivid, well saturated colour reproduction and excellent detail and clarity all round.
I wish you success in your efforts to get you lens fixed!
tfs and have a great weekend.
Paul
Paul

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  • Juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 2232 W: 10 N: 2971] (16891)
  • [2008-04-04 6:35]

Hola amigo,
precioso trabajo,
color e iluminación perfectas,
hermoso ambiente...
bella mariposa y compo.
saludos Alexei.
**Lives in Ukrania and you must repair your sigma in Moscow, in which century we lived?

Hi Alexis!

I don't believe it is too centered, sometimes it is allowed to differ from the rules of third. In your case the diagonal line formed by the leaf, the butterfly and the flower is simply superb! The impact of the picture therefore does not suffer from the fact that the butterfly is centered.

Moreover, it's simply a beautiful picture!

Kind regards

Markus

Hi Alexei,
I think that the cropping is perfect as you really have a great focus on the butterfly, Great composition and POV
Well Done,
Nick :-)

Hi Alexei,
I think this image with the butterfly on center still has much off center compositional balance with the bright flowers on the top and right side and works very well. You acheived beautiful detail of the butterfly in this bright, summery, well lighted scene. Tfs Richard

Alexei,
What beautiful colours and details you've captured here!Very well done!
Cheers!
Goldy

Hola alex, muy buen trabajo, una bonita composición con colores muy vivos y una luz adecuada. Un saludo

Hello Alexei
Very intersting spieces to shoot,
Perfect colors,exposure and POV.Superb shot my friend.

Regards
Fartash

Uma exelente borboleta de qualidade cores e nitides ótima meus parabéns.
Nilson

Hello Alexei,
This is technically pretty perfect but you question your central composition and ÍMHO rightly so. I have therefor made a composition suggestion based on the blurred BG on the right of the butterfly being no asset to the beauty of the image.
Thanks for sharing thi sfine image and i would appreciate your reation to my suggestion.
Best wishes, Ivan

Hello Alexei,
I think there are a lot of options in terms of compo here, simply 'cause this is a very good photograph.
Well done
Alexei
TFS
Annick

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  • jaycee Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2454 W: 10 N: 8044] (25460)
  • [2008-04-04 9:41]

Hi Alexei,

I always felt that some rules are made to be broken - once in a while. This is beautiful as is although Ivan's is lovely too. The beauty of the butterfly, the shiny leaves, and the bright flower add up to a gorgeous sight. A superb picture.

Jane

Hi Alexei,
What a beautiful composition. Here the rule of the thirds fails :). Nice details and a excellent fullframe shot. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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  • lousat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6595 W: 89 N: 15659] (65489)
  • [2008-04-04 9:58]

HI Alex,it's wonderfull,perfect in sharpness ,details and colours,not easy to made a pic like that,my best compliments,Luciano

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  • uleko Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3396 W: 172 N: 3310] (10940)
  • [2008-04-04 10:11]

Hello Alexei,
I hope you can fix your lens that has produced so many lovely images! This is superb and I don't think you need to crop it at all, the background plays its part too! The butterfly is gorgeous and very nicely in focus. Details are sharp and colours beautiful. Brilliant!
TFS and have a nice weekend, Ulla

Hello Alexei,
To me this is more than perfect, should not have any judgment over it on the matter of centre, cos the leafs and flowers replace all!
the sharpness is amazing with nice colour and details in the shot, looks real indeed!
the best exposure and focus that I appreciated
many thanks, my friend
have a wonderful weekend
Tony

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  • mariki Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 838 W: 60 N: 2307] (9477)
  • [2008-04-04 11:34]

Hello Alexei,

Very nice composition. Excellent POV, DOF and sharpness. Wonderful light and colours. As far as the cropping is concerned, I had the same problem with my last picture of spider, I let it centered also.
Cheers,
Mariki

Hi Alex, PERFECT!!! detail, colour, light, composition, POV, DOF....all perfect...regards h

What a perfect capture my friend, the centripetally placed reddish flowers disrupt the centered composition just like the finely in focus leaf in the left foreground, and that sharply in focus b.fly with black&white pattern and colouration details and finely evident wing sculpturing is a terrific addition to this beautiful macro shot. TFS indeed Alexei!
Cheers,
Mehmet

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  • cloud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 497 W: 111 N: 1535] (9539)
  • [2008-04-04 14:06]

Hello Alexei,
There is all, great light, beautiful object among colorful leaves and flowers.
Best regards, Pawel

Stupenda immagine, straodinaria composizione dove forme e colori sono delle iperboli della bellezza, eccellenti POV; DOF e dettagli, splendidi e splendenti i colori. Grazie e complimenti. Ciao Maurizio

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  • Luis52 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1175 W: 8 N: 4240] (15809)
  • [2008-04-04 15:17]

Hi Alexei.
I know how You feel about Your lens. It is hard to have onther or repair it where You live. And belive me I wish I could do something for You.
Nice and sharp the way it is. Great image My friend.
Saludos
Luis52.

Hi Alex,

Wonderful colors! I like the FG/BG even more than the subject itself! Thank you,

Eugene

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  • Adanac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1273 W: 1 N: 6188] (21378)
  • [2008-04-04 19:31]

Hello Alexei,Exceptional work my friend, the colors are vibrant, the details are razor sharp, the depth of field is great nad the composition is beautiful. Amazing Alexei.
Rick

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  • chiliu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1457 W: 0 N: 1176] (6526)
  • [2008-04-04 23:45]

Hi Alex,
Beautiful capture! Excellent focus, sharp detail and very nice colours.
Chi

Hi Alexei, great composition with elegant butterfly with fine details and a splendid flower with fantastic colors, perfect focus and great DOF, wonderful sharpness, very well done, have a good week end, ciao Silvio

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  • joey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1739 W: 224 N: 6872] (24909)
  • [2008-04-05 4:21]

What a lovely image of this Marbled White, Alexei!
I actually quite like the central crop as it leaves room for the magnificent flowers in the top-right corner.
Very sharp with great clarity.
Superb DOF too.
Good to hear your getting your Sigma fixed... it's definately worth doing.
Well done my friend.

Joe

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  • Mana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1772 W: 36 N: 5597] (18598)
  • [2008-04-05 9:44]

Hi Alexei,
Wow........outstanding shot with such glorious colours and sharp details. Magnificent colour contrasts here and the white butterfly stands out perfectly. Superb management of light and exposure levels with a fine DOF. The BG is so soothing. Excellent POV and composition. Kudos.
TFS.
Sumon

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  • gannu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 988 W: 4 N: 3277] (14761)
  • [2008-04-05 10:02]

Hello Alexei, Framing is a personal choice. Nice.sharp and clear shot.Wonderful image and super compo. Ganesh

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2008-04-05 12:10]

Hello Alex,
great shot, very sharp and crisp. Love the colors and detrails.
Love the composition, full of Sun and gorgeous light.
TFS...Sky

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  • Art_R Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 244 W: 20 N: 839] (3892)
  • [2008-04-05 12:37]

Hi Alexei , another very nice photo , I agree with your choice not to crop , the flowers add a lot too the picture.

I saw my first butterfly for the year yesterday , it got away , today ... Snow ! , oh well, welcome moisture to help spring along.

regards

Art

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  • anel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 3053 W: 3 N: 8715] (40574)
  • [2008-04-05 13:01]

Hello Alex,
Very poetical and cute little picture of the Marbled White. I like the space you have left for the surronding, it allows the spectator to imagine a whole story. Funny that we had chosen the same species at almost the same moment.
best regards
Anne

Hola Alexei.
¡Fabulosa geometría!
Hermosos colores y extraordinario encuadre.
Buena nota.
Saludos, JL.

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  • RP1 Gold Star Critiquer [C: 154 W: 1 N: 6] (251)
  • [2008-04-05 15:58]

Hi Alex,
Very nice photo! Beautiful composition and sharp détail.
Felicitation,
Roger

Hello Alexei, my dear friend
a perfect macro of both of butterfly and plants. I think same place in your previous post, since yellow-red flowers.
Your selection great without cropping. It look perfect even in centre. Lighting, colors, sharpness and details excellent. another top class work. thanks for sharing, best wishes
Ahmet

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  • arfer Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2731 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-04-05 22:17]

Hello Alexei

Superb clarity and sharp focus,the details are exquisite.
The lighting is wonderfully handled and the colours are vibrant and well saturated.
This is a beautiful little butterfly and the patterns and markings show well.
Excellent texture,the leaves butterfly and flower look as if I could reach out and touch them.
TFS

Rob

Hi Alex,
Wonderful sharpness and crisp clear image. Colors are rich. No wonder that you decided to repair your Sigma. Hope you get your beloved lens back soon.
JC

Hello Alexei - OK, I censure you! ;}
Good Composition does follow certain basic rules, but rules are made to be broken. If you like it, that's what counts mf.
Your color, exposure, DOF, and detail R excellent..
And the overall "geometry" does win out :)
Well done!
Howard

bonjour alexei
l'image est presque pârfaite,enfin je trouve juste que le papillon est un peu trop centré.
sinon tres bonne netteté.
laurent

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  • SelenE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2249 W: 65 N: 4205] (13972)
  • [2008-04-06 8:57]

Hi Alexei,
Yes,it's a bit centered but still a very good shot. It's crisp sharp with wonderful colors, contrast and lighting.
TFS
Greetings,
Selen

Hola Alexei, a pesar de lo que dices yo creo que en ocasiones el encuadre es poco importante. En este caso ocurre esto pero a mi modo de entender valoro mucho más el poder ver el entorno con igual o mejor claridad que la propia mariposa. Creo que es un buen documento.
Creo que tengo la misma fotografiada hace pocos días. Quizá la publique más adelante.
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He mirado y ya la tengo publicada, pero por la cara opuesta.
Abrazo: Josep Ignasi.

Hi dear Alexei ,
A perfect macro.Colour is here wonderful.composition is great.all of the best.

Very well done
kind regards
Saeed

Hello Alexxeii,

I think rules are for guidance.
If they do not guide in a direction that pleases you then you ignore them!
I think tou were right to ignore them here. All the elements of this shot contribute something to the whole so they deserve to be there.

Wonderful details and vivid, pleasing colours.

kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • Hil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 696 W: 13 N: 1407] (5035)
  • [2008-04-06 12:35]

Hi Alexei,

Lovely shot of the pretty butterfly, I'm pleased you didn't crop, I think we sometimes crop beacause we think we have to rather than what we wnat to do, nicely composed with nice clarity, I like the contrast of the monochrome colours of the Butterfly contrasting with the bright primary colours surrounding it, nice light too.

Hil

I agree: nothing can be cropped mercilessly from this frame, Alexei.
This is the work of your good old lens as your faithful servant.
It is the master who created this image, not the servant.
The image is so realistic it appears as if I am seeing it with my own eyes.
The colours are beautiful beyond description.
If your lens can be repaired, it would give me the utmost pleasure, my friend.
Best regards,
ram

Well caught, Alexei,

you do well without the Sigma lens! You complain about the lack of repair facilities in your country. Be simply aware that we here live trough nightmares as well the moment we ask for guarantee or other repair work with any kind of photographic equipment.It makes me think that those enterprise hope that we throw nice equipment away when a first smudge shows on the lens.

Best regards
Dietrich

Hi Alexei

I am glad you did not crop it. We would not have seen the wonderful splashes of colour that the flowers give if you had and I can easily live with breaking the thirds rule which I frequently do anyway.

It is also beautifully sharp and clear.

TFS
Emma

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  • izler Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1387 W: 3 N: 9] (44)
  • [2008-04-07 9:33]

hello my friend
beautiful species and wonderful macro photo
composition, POV, DOF, light, colours, sharpness and details are great
TFS
regards
izler

Dear Alexei,
Galathea's black and white markings offer an exquisite contrast to the lush colours of flowers and background - one of the best combinations possible. All the splendour of summer concentrated in one image. Thank you!
My best regards,
Peter

Still me Al,
what a wonderfull pallet of colours, perfect lighting and splendid composition again
bravo
Pat

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  • jmp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1659 W: 95 N: 2273] (8415)
  • [2008-04-07 14:05]

Hi Alexei,
This image is fine as it is! Colours, details... and the atmosphere you have got with the light and the dof is absolutely wonderful. What an skillful job!
TFS, José M.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2008-04-07 20:29]

Fantastic sharpness my friend, a very impressive shot, well composed with a perfect technique, thanks!

Mario

Wonderful shot. Very expressive portrait. Gorgeous the colours
Best wishes,
Achim

hello Alexei

firstly lets go with the subject that is centered on the image,
first thing i said myself the butterfly is centered but then
i saw the flowers and leaf and i said, those too are doing
part of the image, it is why i love the framing you gived
to the image, the flower and leaf of the right side of the image
is giving a excellent DOF to the image

lovely luminosity of the image, with great sharpness and details,

TFS

Asbed

Hello Alexei. This is gorgeous looking image indeed in geometry of beauty. The Sigma lens works very well under bright light and you have maintained nice shallow depth in muting the background. The flower and the leaf are very poetic with this stunning butterfly perching on it. Very well done and best regards. Jusni

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  • sayat Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 280 W: 0 N: 258] (1457)
  • [2008-04-09 8:38]

An amazing shot in both light management and sharpness Dear Alexei! I can't help admiring the fantastic beauty of it and the perfect background. The central placement is just fine with me!

Your images a re most popular....and sometimes I wonder if it isn't politics..I don't mean that in a negative way. The citizens of my country are truly jaded in their opinions. I think, they think, they are in charge of the world..I am sad to say they are not. The US is on a track to rid nature of anything which might be in mas way. Let us hope that such beautiful butterfly's as this in such as ooloured worlds as yours can remain....A very fine tribute to you, nature and your work in both.

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  • smitha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 73 N: 1165] (4409)
  • [2008-04-09 19:48]

Hello Alexei,
Superb shot! What struck me first when I saw the thumbnail was 'Wow! what vibrant colours'. Excellent clarity, DOF and POV. I understand why you don't want to crop this picture. :) Good focus and very sharp picture. The intricate patterns on the wings of the butterfly and even on the leaf and flower are well captured. After seeing Ivan's WS, I think both versions have a charm of their own. If you want to give more importance to the butterfly, i think one should crop it. But if you want to present the butterfly and its colourful surroundings i think the original is best.
Thanks for the share,
Regards,
Smitha.

Alexei,
I wish you much luck.
I've gone through this sort of agony when I lived in Europe; this sort of trouble is common in Europe.
Amazingly DETAILED register.
Greetings,
Mario.

Ciao Alex,
trovo questa foto particolarmente armoniosa e la farfalla al centro dell'inquadratura per me è perfetta.
Magnifici i colori e la luce di questo scatto.
Saluti dalla Sicilia,
Marcello

Wow Alexei! What a beautiful scene this is. Yes, the subject is centered but surrounded bu such beautiful environment! Colors, lightning and details are wonderful! This sun made a wonderful natural flash, bringing brilliance on the leaf. This is a very nice picture. Thanks a lot,
Claudine

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  • Jamesp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1369 W: 9 N: 6334] (18906)
  • [2008-04-11 9:51]

Hi Alexei

A great shot - good composition and POV with good colour and superb detail. Well observed and captured.

James

So sharp and perfect light/exposure. Grand color!!! I think the Gaillardia must grow everywhere in the world almost. They are amazingly beautiful flowers.

Bonjour Alexei.
Magnifique image,la photo es trés belle.Amitiés.
martinmena

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  • sily Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 239 W: 6 N: 395] (1934)
  • [2008-04-14 13:44]

HI Alex!
Beautiful shot with focus I really find pleasing,and central composition is very striking and effective.

Hallo Alexei
What a delightful and sunny view. The details of both the flower and the butterfly are great and I cannot say one is better than the other. The yellow and red of the flower and the green leaf highlightes butterflies details to a great extent. The clarity of the markings and patterns on the wings are just great. I also like the way you presented this butterfly. This way one can see the difference in size between the flower and the insect. Thanks for sharing. I appreciated this one very much.
Kind regards
Anna

Dear Alexei,

Sorry I've missed a few of your great images over the past 10 days, but will make it up with you today :)
First thing I whant to say about this beauty is the fact that I disagree with you about the butterfly is to centered.
Normally It might be the fact, yes you're right, but in this case with the beautiful colors of the out of focus flower in the BG on the top right side and the wonderful clear leaf on the lower left side, the frame is perfectly filled up with details that really add to the entyre scene.
In other words perfect work!!!
Clarity, sharpness and exposure are all fantastic, and the colors, contrast and details amazing.
A great joy to look at. TFS!!!

Warm regards, Harry

Hi Alexei, What I like about this amazing picture is not just its composition, sharpness and DOF. It is guaranteed that Alexei WILL get it in his pictures :-). But I was observing the natural effect, as if one could reach and touch. As if the picture was seen through a window. Bravo my friend. That is photography!!

Warm regards,
Kiran

Hello Alexei,
The beautiful flowers make a fine setting for the beautiful butterfly!
The black and white pattern stands out really well in the colourful surroundings, giving a nice 3-D feeling...
A well balanced composition, a treat to my eyes!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • Maite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 998 W: 65 N: 1270] (5199)
  • [2008-04-25 7:41]

Hello Alexei
Even if it is centered it's a gorgeous shot with a gorgeous composition. You did too well not to cut it for it's too beautiful in all the details. As usual, the framing, DOF, sharpness, colors and exposure are perfect and create a delightful sensation.
Thank you very much for making it possible.
My best regards
Maite

Hello Alexei!
As I see this time you decided to photograph a butterfly only as a small element of composition. I like this wide POV with insect in the middle. And even as a small creature it pays attention, mainly because of its natural black-white colouration (it makes a natural but beautiful contrast with rest of picture).
Anyway, I am not sure if keeping entire leaf and flower would be good (this is only my opinion of course :>). In such wide POV lack of the end of leaf does not look too good, even if the photo in general is very beautiful :)
Technique is great as always: perfectly saturated colours, very good DOF and sharpness :)
Best greetings and have a nice weekend my Friend!
Friendly yours,
Radomir

Great shot! The variation of colours is what strikes me the most in this picture. Also good sharpness and lighting.

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1515 W: 18 N: 3165] (11638)
  • [2008-06-10 11:07]

Hi Alexei

This is a lovely butterfly, wonderful sharp details and perfectly exposed. Excellent DOF as well

TFS

Karan

Hi Alex!
Quality of this picture holds me breath. I can not write anything more.
WOW! Gratulacje i pozdrowienia - Roma

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