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Copyright: Sochirca Dan (deud) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 438 W: 11 N: 534] (2540)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-13
Categories: Insects
Camera: Olympus Camedia C-765 UZ
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Hoverflies [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-10-07 10:52
Viewed: 5315
Points: 8
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The first attempt to catch the bee at work. Any comments are welcome! I know the first minus - a little cutted wing. But i was in hurry. Sorry for this.
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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2004-10-07 11:36]

Hi Sochirca, firstly it is not a bee, it is a hoverfly, of genus Eristalis (very likely to be Eristalis tenax) and they are bee mimics so their disguise is good!

Nice picture, colours are good composition is a little too central and it's a shame you lost some of the wing tip. Nevertheless, very good work.

Superbe photo saturn, on pourrait presque croire que l'abeille va se mettre ŕ marcher sur les pattes avant.
Felicitations, j'aime beaucoup !

Yes very nice colourful composition of this Hoverfly. Nice one.

Hi Sochirca
I like the overall impact and colours. The nis have been noted. I would suggest a tighter crop, the subject is the bee, the flower can be smaller. I will try a WS.

  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2004-11-25 23:36]

Sochirca, the colors here are really great.

Best regards. (The "smileys" are not here.)


La categoria gandaci si fluturi putini te rivalizeaza ... Fluturii si albinele tale sunt de o calitate excelenta, foarte competitiva ! Tzia-s fi postat puncte insa nu exista posibilitatea, nu stiu de ce ,,smilies,, sunt ascunsi pentru tine aici !Imi pare rau ...

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