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Carduelis


Carduelis
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Copyright: Ahmet Karatash (rousettus) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2216 W: 73 N: 5657] (19818)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-12
Categories: Birds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Birds of the Middle East -I- [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-03-04 17:57
Viewed: 7729
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Carduelis cannabina - Ketenkusu = Linnet
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Hello Ahmet,

Warm welcome to TN!! Hope you will learn a lot from this site as many of us have ...

I like your shot, the branch is good. The rule of of thirds suggests that the object should not be dead centre but rather along 1/3rd of the pic. Also, the pic should be cropped so that the bird has space to look into ... yours does have space to look into.

TFS!
Liezel

Salut Ahmet
Un beau portrait de ce superbe oiseau. Félicitations pour le beau travail ,les couleurs sont justes. Bravo pour la netteté et les détails du plumage.
Bienvenu sur le site de TN

Merci pour l'envoie et bonne fin de soirée ...JP

Hi Ahmet,

good portrait of this bird, well composed. Maybe there just was a little lack in sharpness.

TFS

Giorgio

Salam Ahmet. So this is your first post. Your interest for birds showed well here from the start. You have made excellent progress and this shot is still brilliant with superb bokeh. I like the perch and the sharpness of the eye. Well done and best regards. Jusni

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2791 W: 0 N: 6696] (25839)
  • [2008-11-23 21:48]

Hello ahmet,
a very beautiful shot of this bird.
Lovely and cute. You shot is sharp and clear. well muted background makes your photo very pleasant and captivating.
Excellent composition and pose on the tip of a branch.
Brilliant presentation in nice lighting.

regards,
Foozi

Merhaba hocam güzel bir tür.
Elinize sağlık.

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