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Copyright: yilmazuslu yilmaz (yilmazuslu) (27)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-28
Categories: Flowers
Exposure: f/6.7, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-01 12:01
Viewed: 4136
Points: 3
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To jpinkham: hiyilmazuslu 1 11-09 09:02
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Hello, Yilmazuslu, and welcome to TN. A very vibrant first post, with excellent color. The point of view is interesting. A couple of suggestions -- frames are rarely needed on TN, and, though yours is elegant and acceptable, you might have used the space better to show us the wing tips of your subject. Also you may need to work with your exposure settings to better control depth of field -- part of this image is pleasingly sharp, part of it is distractingly soft. Ideally, in this one, you'd want all of the butterfly in sharp focus. Finally, an explanatory note, if you can provide one of what you're showing us would help, too, just as the camera details are helpful. We'll look forward to more posts from you. This is a respectable beginning.

Interesting shot. Though most of the picture is not weel focussed,.. still this out of focus has created an artistic touch. I think by changing the colour of the background,.. making it totally black for example may be, can improve it.

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