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Come for a swim

Come for a swim
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Copyright: SUBRAMONIAM SK (subbu68) (211)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2013-11-22
Categories: Birds
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/800 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2013-11-22 3:31
Viewed: 1730
Points: 4
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Found a group of sparrows up for a swim in a pool in a park
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To nanreh: That was a detailed comment. Thank yousubbu68 1 11-24 09:01
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Hello Subramoniam
Nice moment you captured.
perfect composition with lovely colour.
best wishes,

Subramoniam: I love this photograph for its beauty on two levels. In one, the natural plane, this cheerful group of beautiful sparrows (I think its plumage is not always appreciated in all its richness of color) focused clearly enjoying the freshness of a bath with clean water. But on another level, less obvious perhaps, is that of a powerful abstract composition, split in half along the diagonal which is the boundary between water and dry surface, the counterpoint between the reflections of the liquid and shades as brown brushstrokes ground, and sparrows here in the abstract level, seem spots here and there operate as integrators of both spaces.
Complex a work of great artistic value.
You are a great artist ...

Your friend in Argentina, Hernan Bortondello.

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