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Blue Jay


Blue Jay
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerome Bourgoin (edji) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 83 W: 8 N: 22] (426)
Genre: Animals
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-09-24
Categories: Birds
Camera: Canon PowerShot A70
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/60 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-01-09 11:23
Viewed: 4654
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
A repost with another framing...

---original at Blue Jay

Photographs of a blue geai in the marsh of north (marais du nord) at Lac St-Charles (Quebec). The colors of the leaves in background indicates to us that the autumn arrived.

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  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1023 W: 61 N: 648] (2083)
  • [2005-01-09 11:24]

Good capture Jerome. Nice composition with good colours and POV. Well done

Nice shot Jerome.
Good composition, colours and pose.
Little out of focus but still a nice picture.
Well done.

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  • Midi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 146 W: 24 N: 183] (2418)
  • [2005-01-09 12:38]

Oui un peu trouble, mais c'est une trés belle photo. J'aime les couleurs de l'oiseau et du feuillage en arrière plan.Bravo.

It's a lovely critter you caught. Strong composition and nice autumn colours in the BG. The subject is a bit OOF and therefore soft. All and all still a nice shot. Thanx for sharing.

Hi Jerome
Nice one this, the crop is now much better, But what happened to you first post? You should not delete it, just repost the new day, week etc, but with a new file name, I think.

Yes, that's about what I had in mind when making my recommendations on the first one. Cropped this way you get much more emphasis on the bird, and the autumn colours of the bg sets him off nicely ;-))

Great pose and very nice BG. The colours and markings on that little Jay are wonderful. Well done.

A nice capture of this Blue Jay. Good detail and color on the bird, and I really like the backround.

Salut Jérôme, c'est mieux comme ça le cadrage. Plus d'impact. ;-)

Composition: ****
Sharpness: *
Color: ***
DOF: *
POV: ****

Focus really soft on the bird...
TFS.

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